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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209
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actions, no forethought, destroying pillaging not even stopping long enough to enjoy the plunder just actions any afterthoughts are executed and buried quickly in my survival kit this is my life and I will destroy it if I want to... but my mind refuses to sequel my actions someone's gotta tell me when I am wrong but again the question... do I run retreat scatter withdraw or stand my ground and fight for my life? and do I want to? |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If you don't want to fight for your life, you're in for a butt-kicking from a fellow o&o!!!! *S* You just try giving up and see how quickly I tell you you're wrong! LOL. Oh... this wasn't for me? (innocent look) Hmmmm... In that case... well done! *S* |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
You fight cause Suthern has a really hard kick *g* and anyway, you're worth fighting for..  HUSG Ouvrir mon coeur et âme |
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Raul Noriega Junior Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 11 |
Thought-provoking. There is an air of sad sentiment in this piece that is beautiful and giving. I'd love to read more. Very nice. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I like your style, and can certainly relate to the message. But give up? Myself, I am like a horror movie, just when you think I'm done with, something in me makes me pop up again,to kick some butt. Looking forward to some kick-ass poetry in the future. You've definetly go what it takes. |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
thanks all, and nope this was for me...lol...but maybe a good swift kick is what I need...thanks my friends |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
You had better want to fight...or i will be in the line behind suthern!...*grin* We all have moments where it just takes everything to just drag ourselves out of bed...and face the world we just want to hide from... I know you got what it takes...dig deep Corazon...you gots peeps rooting for you....*smiling* including me... I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
thanks breathe....you know I post these cause *I* need to write them, not for support, but with comments like yours and the above...I sure am glad I have peeps pulling for me...thanks |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Well sweetie...all I can tell you is to keep going, something might be waiting for you that you didn't even know was there!!! (And I'll give you a good swift kick...if that's what you need dearie!!! G*) Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
If you have to ask if you really wantto or not.....then, of course, you don't. Excellent writing again. |
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