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Neutral Love |
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mystery Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 79 |
Actual people inspired me to write this poem, I just picked a color to represent each gentleman. Choosing love isn't easy especially when you have a variety of choices each candidate possesses an unique quality but only one of these loves could end up with me Mr. Gray, The most experienced of all my loves/ how I admired your wisdom & maturity/ I love your salt & pepper hair/ but your lack of cheer/ is beginning to make me gloomy/ Handsome Mr. Bown, we were almost one/ how your skin would reflect off the rays of my sun/ how I always knew that our love would work/ but your true colors showed when you treated me like dirt/ Mr. Beige, the sweetest of them all/ many women mistaked your kindness for a weakness/ your sensitives side moves me/ your grayish-brown eyes amuse me/ never afraid to get in touch with your femininity/ I wonder why things didn't work out for you and me/ My purist Mr. White/ how you certainly impassioned me/ I was intensely heated by you at first sight/ until I discovered how weakly colored you were/ out of all of my loves, you lacked something/ respect for all other hues putting yourself on top/ instantly becoming turned off, I had to let this relationship drop/ My everlasting love/ how could I overlook you when all along you were right in front of me/ I apologize for that/ I love how you can relate to me/ because you have seen hard times, you understand me/ so understand that you've only been disclosed for security purposes/ Mr.Black, I promise not to hurt you loving me will be prosperous because unlike others my colors are true |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Hi mystery, nice use of color themes. What's the / used for in your poetry. I'm not familiar with it. It kind of distracting. Nice to have you here. Parker |
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