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Do You Think Of Me?
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Do You Think Of Me? |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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Do You Think Of Me? < !signature-->Do you think of me in the early morning? When the sunlight warms your face and the wind caresses your ear, do you feel the flush I put upon your cheeks and my heated breaths as I whispered your name? Do you think of me throughout the day as you work? When your fingers stroke the smoothness of your keyboard, do you recall the silkiness of my skin or the way we touched each other with our words when our hands were unable to reach across the distance between us? Do you think of me and remember how every line became a tender caress; how each word became a breath, an embrace, a kiss as we made love in syllables and time stood still? Do you think of me in the still of the night as you lay alone and dream of better days? Do my hands, once more, sail the contours of your body leaving you breathless in their wake? Can you feel my gentle caresses, even now, as I reach out to you from the depths of my dreams? And as the memories crash like waves, their shores the recesses of my battered heart and mind, I can’t help but wonder... After all this time, do you think of me? Have you ever noticed That the words... "Goodbye" "I'm sorry" "I love you" Are so easy to pronounce ...Yet so hard to say ~Javan [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 02-21-2000).] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
By gosh ... i think I am thinking of you right now Headed for the shower  Rex}<{{{{o> |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Ruth, This is fabulous, I think your gonna have a lot of the guys running for the shower with this one, hope there offices are equipped...LOL |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Very nice! I liked the line: "the recesses of my battered heart and mind". where shattered memories can be found, I think. Hope the week goes well for you! Danny |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is breathtakingly beautiful, Ruth! So touching. Well written, of course! Denise |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Beautiful, Hoot Owl. |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Be still this heart, Ruth- beautiful expression here with a very good question... "Do you ever think of me?" I liked this one a bunch. JF |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
oh my gosh ruth this is stunning, makes me cry....wow |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A poem from the heart can't help but be beautiful, especially when that heart is yours, Hoot Liz |
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Smiles4U New Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 3 |
None are wiser than the Owl, One who speaks from the heart, Your wisdom,your kindness And all that you give, Make`s you,truely a work of ART. Well written piece Owl  [This message has been edited by Smiles4U (edited 02-21-2000).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, Hoot!!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you everyone |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Whew! This is breathtaking...word perfection!...  )I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ruth, he would be a fool if he didn't...what a wonder you write with words, Ruth. Excellent! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I don't think you need to worry, Ruth. If there is one word to describe you it is....unforgettable. Beautiful writing. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ Beautiful, you know. And I would hazard a guess that yes, he does. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Applausing you! This was great. I have to LOL @ Rex! I tend to bet with words like that he hasn't forgotten and thinks of you often |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
That is such a beautiful piece. I going to put this one in my special save file. I truly feel like I can't compliment you enough |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
WOW....thank you all for reading and for your wonderful comments on this one |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I like ypur poem very much.Keep it up. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is a fabulous poem that reveals so much about the feelings inside your heart. I don't know about the other guy but I'm thinking about you right now. James |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Do I think of you??? I do now!!!! - lol - this is truly a sensuous, romantic poem. Man! I wish I had written this. But, then, if I had written it, ol' Rex wouldn't be in the shower right now, would he? |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
LJA...thank you for the laugh on a day I really needed one Everyone....thank you for reading and your kind replies |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Wow,You always write so good.I love your work. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
vandana...wow, thanks for resurecting this from the dungeon. I hadn't read it myself since I posted it, thanks for bringing it back up |
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