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Tears Upon My Pillow
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Tears Upon My Pillow |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania 
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i want you here to wipe away my tears and to make it i okay need you with me here and now to make me smile again i love you more than anyone can you say the same to me ~Susie~ |
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mama duck Junior Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 41Northern California |
HOW ADORABLE!! TEAR DROPS. NICE WORK. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is really endearing!!! Hope that last question is YES!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I love how you did this, very creative. |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
mama duck~ Thank you so much, you're too kind  .devina~ Me too! Now I'm Still waiting on an answer .Lost Dreamer~ Thank you so much too ! ~Susie~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Angel I love this!! I love the form and the words. . . they truly come from the heart. . . Reminds me of cummings or some of the "concrete" poems of the 60's and 70's. . . Really beautiful!! --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Sven I'm so glad you enjoyed it although the 70's and especially 60's were just a bit before my time..~Susie~ |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Very creative and sooo.. sweet! |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Romantic yes I say it is Very nice design with this Your poem is so nice Sweet The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Angel~ THIS IS GORGEOUS ! I LOVE IT. LOVE THE CONTENT. LOVE THE FORMAT. Just LOVE it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
SeptSong Thank you so much. I'm so happy you enjoyed it  .HelmutB Your words are too kind, sir. You're making me blush  .Mentor Marge All of your beautiful poems in the form of pictures were the inspiration for this. I can only hope to be as talented as you one day .~Susie~ |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
So beautiful! Very creative format, I love it! *Krista Knutson* "Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Let me add that I love this too! Original <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
So simple and sweet, yet it says so much Very creative Liz |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"I love you more than anyone can you say the same to me" cause if you can I'd love to stay and if you can't I'm on my way. James |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Alwye Thanks so much! WhtDove I'm glad you liked it Liz Thank you too jmlee12345 I love those lines .~Susie~ |
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