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True North |
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SacredHeart New Member
since 2000-02-20
Posts 2 |
True North I am wishing my truth north "alive" My pain is so real I sometimes thrive My brain says peace and my heart is now quiet Should I feel this way for which I know is right. As I lay here and think of my past I sometimes wonder will this last My heart is dying, crying for more But my body, mind and soul is torn I feel I am sinking, clawing for natural ground My only wish is, Is this my true north I have found My wish has failed, my heart broken once again I cry to the clouds, Dear God, have I sinned? My soul is now dead, release me from my pain Someone hear my cries, for I am broken once again Rip my heart out, and give me a new For once I am born, I promise to cherish you My soul is cleansed, my heart is now alive My pain has ceased, for now my tears are gone. I am back on my journey of what I thought I found. No longer sinking or clawing for natural ground. By:Amy |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Very nice first post, welcome to Passions! I know you will like it here. |
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Brent Hotchkin Junior Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 42Florida,USA |
WOW!!! You realy took my heart for a ride with that one. EXCELENT first post. Welcome, Welcome, Welcome Give us more please. |
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nonsense New Member
since 2000-02-20
Posts 8 |
This is a great poem. Very inspiring, it makes one think of their own "true north". I look forward to more!! Nonsense |
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