Open Poetry #6 |
Jumping Naked on the Bed |
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jumping naked on the bed brown legs sturdy potato chips clutched and crisply flying crunching graceful soaring dance Jumping naked on the bed grainy salty bed of chips glee abandoned childhood rapture curls hopping legs hop-scotching Jumping naked on the bed giggles and brown eyes evening coming jumped the sky to dark you did lit with lithesome childhood glee Time delights in captured moment loving eyes can see though blinded down these naked years without you Jumping naked on the bed < !signature--> In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 02-20-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hi little Mommie~ A great big hug to you, love. Oh, Martie ... it has to be so difficult. Cherish these lovely memories of Michelle even though they have to bring tears. Someday, the smiles will outnumber the tears. God be with you, my friend. I love you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, A wonderful piece of writing. *L* |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
I have to admit...the title caught my eye...I don't know what I expected and quite honestly surprised by the content...I am truly sorry for your loss...but this simply enchanting... Wonderful portrayal... Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--Thank you for your abundance of love. Sy--I think you're wonderful Breathe--I know, the title is a little titillating, but thanks for reading and for your sweet reply. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Exquisite, Martie. The little rememberances are always the sweetest. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
I love this one Martie...very touching portrait you've painted here... Chris |
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