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INclan
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0 posted 2000-02-20 05:31 PM



Earth in cold embrace
The ground rat saw his shadow
Jake is 10 today

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Munda
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since 1999-10-08
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1 posted 2000-02-20 06:27 PM


Very good ! I know how hard it is to write Haiku. Very hard !!  
INclan
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2 posted 2000-02-20 07:09 PM


Thank you, Munda.  I enjoy the style and the challange.  I also like to add a little variety to the poetry posted.

INclan

Chris Goodman
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since 2000-01-28
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3 posted 2000-02-20 07:28 PM


INclan,

Okay my turn...what style exactly is that & what is the structure?  Let me know I am up for a challenge.  P.S.  I liked it!

Chris

 Blue Moon

Chris Goodman
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since 2000-01-28
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Issaquah, Washington usa
4 posted 2000-02-20 07:28 PM


INclan,

Okay my turn...what style exactly is that & what is the structure?  Let me know I am up for a challenge.  P.S.  I liked it!

Chris

 Blue Moon

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