Open Poetry #6 |
The Message that Time Teaches |
Martie
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Posts 28049California |
The message that time Teaches The messenger is here with my mother’s voice and my father’s eyes in my children’s tears and my lover’s sigh And says listen to the message that time teaches Singing when your heart is full brings sweetness to your voice Holding the hand of one who walks along the river leads to the appreciation of little things Listening to the message of the sea humbles an overripe opinion Embracing in love sets a fire that will not be extinguished Looking inward for the teacher calms the trembling fingers of your grasping search Laughter emptying into your troubled soup sweetens the bitterness and strengthens all the essential ingredients The messenger is here with my mother’s voice and my father’s eyes in my children’s tears and my lover’s sigh And says listen to the message that time teaches |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Martie, Your message sings to me, this is so beautiful, thanks for sharing this one. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Universal truths in a beautiful song. Not many poets can do that. Exquisite, Martie |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Martie, Time is something you have learned to be presious and valueable, and for what ever reason your wisdom has come to be this exspresses it very nicely, wonderful poem. Cerenity-1 (AKA: Cerenity) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've listened well, Martie... your words are wise and beautiful! |
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Martie
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Posts 28049California |
Every day has a lesson, you just have to look back and see them there, smiling maybe, or thumbing their nose. Thank you for your thoughtful replies to this poem. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I read your message loud and clear, Martie, and it's excellent. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Nice Message here Martie...thanks... Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Clearly a wonderful message for us all. I love the way it sings your song. Marvelous. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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