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| Open Poetry #6 |
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Dream Master |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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Deep in the shadow you wait there for me Watching me sleeping feeling my dreams Not even knowing of what I am seeing Admirering me from a far my being My dream master keeping me safe As along I sleep awaiting awake In the morn you'll be gone Sun inflood the dawn Dividing the night into day Off to your land to sleep await Then dusk its upon the sky As day is lost into darkness You arise to stand and watch As to sleep my eyes flood |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Whiskey~ Lovely. Just lovely. No way is this gonna lay on a back page ! Here you go ..... to the top ! Love it. Love you, gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Whiskey, Where have you been? Enjoyed the poem. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thanks for the replies, I have been helping out a friend of mine that just had a baby at 25 weeks , so not alot of time to get online to post I am very sorry to have missed all the wonderful poems I have alot of reading to catch up on  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Nice to see you back Whiskey! Sun inflood the dawn Love that line! You have excellent word usage here. Hope your friend is doing ok. K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is perfect...so full of imagery and vision.. a great read!! take care, janet marie I love you Is all that you can't say- Years gone by and still... Words don't come easily Like I love you, I love you... But you can say baby... Baby can I hold you tonight Maybe if I told you the right words At the right time you'd be mine... Tracy Chapman |
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