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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I am not yelling Don't tell me I'm screaming If you would just listen To what I am saying I would not have to Exaggerate my point! Now do you read me Loud and clear? OR Do you want me To Yell It Right In YOUR EAR! !! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
OUCH! Got my attention.... geez.... who could ignore this plea? Now, you gonna write the poem about what's really on your mind? hehe... Thanks for an interesting read... I absolutely LOVE free verse... this one was very deliberate and forceful. Nice job. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Keep it down in here, heard ya screaming in adults. Great poem. Parker |
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Compgirl Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 85USA |
I have felt that way a few times but in all kindness it is better to keep in on paper. Cute poem.  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
What |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
haha...great poem septsong...very creative... its always good to keep a sense of humor about it all...and Nans reply did just that as well...good job! take care, janet marie |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Believe me I am laughing! I just wrote this poem as the thoughts came to me last night, when my teenager was just being a teenager! As usual not listening! I told her just look what you caused me to do, I wrote a poem, unintentionally! |
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