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| Open Poetry #6 |
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How many days |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
How many days, I can count , How many ways, I've to try, How many days, I've to stay, How many ways, I've to try, And put my heart in happines, How many ways, I've to think I CAN DO IT, How many days, I've to cry, How many ways, I've to try, How many days, I've to think I'm fine, How many days, |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Vandana, Im not sure how to reply to this one but I didn`t wanna let it go without letting you know that I took the time to read  You keep writing and I`ll keep reading  Wizz Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Usually poems that leave me hanging bug me a little to what the author wanted to say, but in this poem, it was almost needed. No need for an explanation. How many days, I think I know the filling rhyme. Joy |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I kinda agree with Joy 14 here. I liked the style you used, even though clarity of meaning is vague (maybe on purpose). "How many days", should not be counted by number but by content, I think! Nice work! Danny |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Vandana, I might be wrong but are you trying to say that you are in a relationship that just might not be what you want and that you are trying to find enough reasons to stay? Weather I understood it or not I liked it very much thank you, Cerenity-1 |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Hi, Vandana,Enjoyed your poem Many of your poems are about an elusive love, and I am waiting for a happy one. Are they all about the same man?, or have you just created him? Liz |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Wizzzard,Thank you for your comment. Joy,you too,thanks a lot Cerently,You're right,It's about a relationship poem. Liz,As always you make my poems so warm.Thank you.No,liz,I don't have any man yet,Yes I did create a man for my poems. THANK YOU Thank you all And of cousre speical thanks to danny,Wo always reads my poems.[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 02-20-2000).] |
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