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Nurse Crachet
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0 posted 2000-02-19 06:27 PM


Dance Marathon

It's here it's now
even crazy some how
to see these Justin's
with their bruised shins.
Lady in Red wants permission
a flower like her is a dandelion
rather have a once beautiful rose
then someone dressed in those clothes.
The D.J.'s playing some grooving dance songs
and I seen two Justin's wearing white lacy tongs.

[This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 02-19-2000).]

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Nurse Crachet
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1 posted 2000-02-19 06:47 PM


I forgot to mention the prizes for best dancers from Saturday 8pm till Sunday 6pm.

1st prize: Room with a view for 1 week(I see Elmer Fudd winning this one)
2nd prize: A weekend furlough( I see Andrew winning this one.)
3rd prize: 1 special guest allowed for 1 day
4th prize: Choice of the next social function.

I could not guess on the last two prizes for I have no clue to all the others dance qualities.

Get dancing and good luck!



[This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 02-19-2000).]

Justin Spire
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since 2000-02-19
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2 posted 2000-02-19 08:09 PM


I heard there's a dance
so I came as soon
as I had a chance.
Even prizes to boot
glad I got untangled
from my parachute.
Nobody's here yet,
but when they arrive
were all gonna sweat.



Justin Tolerable
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since 2000-02-19
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3 posted 2000-02-19 08:53 PM


All you groovy dancers
Had better stand aside
Justin's here to show you
Just how to slip and slide

You think you'll win the prizes
I'll tell you this right now
I'll mop the floor with all of you
I'll really show you how

To move your bodies to the groove
I'll bump you and I'll grind
I'll limbo and I'll manbo
And wiggle my tight behind

So don't show up at all poor folk
You haven't got a chance
For Justin's here, you know I'll win
Even in these pants.

Lady in Red
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since 2000-02-16
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4 posted 2000-02-19 09:19 PM


Knock - knock, may I please join too ?
I love dancing. Is the King there too ?
My friend Crachet doesn't hear my plea
How much longer before I go crazy ?

Justin Nuendo
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 86
Ozzz
5 posted 2000-02-19 09:22 PM


I’m sorry  M’lady
I’d luv to invite ya in
But I am not sure
If that’d be OK with the King

While you wait a bit
Right there next to the door
I will spend some minutes
With Justin Spire on the floor

Besides, Nurse Crachet
Is a little jealous here
And I wouldn’t want to ruin
This happy atmosphere

Although with Justin Tolerable
It will be very hard to cheer
He’s known for his rude manners
And kill any happy atmosphere !



Nurse Crachet
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6 posted 2000-02-19 10:41 PM


Wow, look at Justin Tolerable groove
he can surely take that body and move,
and look at Justin Nuendo take to the floor
Did I just hear someone pounding on the door?
Why Lady in Red what brings you to these parts?
Last time I saw you, you were breaking ladies hearts.
As Justin Tolerable barges through the door and grabs her hand
I go falling to floor bumping my head firmly, floating off to wonderland.

Justin Spire
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since 2000-02-19
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7 posted 2000-02-19 11:27 PM


What happened over here?
The Nurse is dead I fear,
call someone for help
she's bleeding from her scalp.
I can't take this she's gonna die
is there anybody here who can qualify
to treat this here Nurse who is so pale?
This is serious she's looking mighty frail.

Nurse Crachet
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8 posted 2000-02-19 11:51 PM


Off In Wonderland

Doors opening
distant call
voices echoing
how'd she'd fall.

icicles bouncing
becoming spears
animals gathering
warding away fears.

Siren wailing
little hope here
CPR failing
dying in fear.


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ONE FLEW OVER
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since 1999-09-18
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9 posted 2000-02-20 10:12 AM


I'll check her pulse (as he places his hand on her knee)
I think she's starting to convulse.
I'm running to go get some water
when I got back she started to shiver.
A blanket I'll fetch from the closet
I got back and she was in a sweat.
Where are all the Stutigans when you need them?
I guess we're on are way to losing our Gem.

[This message has been edited by ONE FLEW OVER (edited 02-20-2000).]

Justin Spire
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 13

10 posted 2000-02-20 04:08 PM


(Talking to Lady in Red)

Fine lady I don't think we've met,
my name Is Justin Spire
I think your name is Juliet.

I watched him drag you into here
I would have come sooner
but I was in so much fear.

What are they gonna do with her
she did not deserve such pain
all of them seem amateur?

Where did Justin Tolerable go?
You must be so confused,
I think she took a hefty blow.

Come over with me Juliet
I need to see for myself
if Crachet is conscious yet.

Lady in Red
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 147

11 posted 2000-02-20 05:22 PM


Pleased to meet you Justin Spire
It was aweful I must admit
This Justin Tolerable guy
Tried to hold me in his grip

Let us go, sweet young man
And find out what is wrong
With this Crachet woman asleep
Together we will be strong

Oh my goodness ! There is blood
Running from a real deep cut
And her nose looks very bruised
She will soon look like a jelly doughnut !

I am truly sorry guys
but I don't think it's good taste
to now want a lick or two
from this marsh mallow face

Where are Doc Moose and Crayon King ?
For an emergency like this
Please guys do hurry back
We have a real Stute crisis !

Justin Nuendo
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 86
Ozzz
12 posted 2000-02-20 05:31 PM


Dear Crachet ! Ya did it again !
Ya took off to another world !
Only this time without herione in yar brain !

Nurse Crachet
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since 1999-09-27
Posts 318
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13 posted 2000-02-20 11:23 PM


Where am I, who are you,
and who are you, and you?
What are you doing in my house,
where's my faithful dog?
Are you some kind of aliens,
what are you staring at?
Why do you look purple,
and you look red?
I'm confused,
where is my head?


[This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 02-20-2000).]

Justin Spire
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since 2000-02-19
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14 posted 2000-02-21 02:04 PM


Nurse Crachet it's Justin Spire
can you see me Nurse Crachet?
I'm so happy you did not expire.
Look, look everyone she's awake
Juliet, Juliet where did you go?
I hope not off to follow the fake.
Justin Nuendo get me some water,
are you thirsty Nurse Crachet?
"What's that?"
Where's your darling daughter?

Justin Nuendo
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 86
Ozzz
15 posted 2000-02-21 03:00 PM


Here's for the Nurse some water
Is she really up an awake ?
Btw, Justin Spire
who do ya mean with this fake ?

Justin Nuendo
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 86
Ozzz
16 posted 2000-02-21 03:14 PM


Hmm, I guess I lost me mind a bit
of course ya mean Justin Tolerable
wanting to be the King of this place
which is Justin Probable !

Lady in Red
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 147

17 posted 2000-02-21 03:20 PM


My true name is indeed Juliet
Given to me by my Father dear
When my Mother left us for a doctor
For years we shed many a tear

Oh dear ! Oh my ! What do I hear !
What are you saying mixed up Nurse !
Are YOU my long lost Mother ?
Or is this some evil curse ?


Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
18 posted 2000-02-21 04:14 PM


Second place to Fudd!
That just cannot be
I'm the hippest King
That you'll ever see!

Ask Lady In Red
The moves that I make
How I hit the floor
with shimmy and shake

Second place to Fudd!
That's Justin Tolerable
That spud can't cut rug
He's wholy incapable

Me, I'm Fred Astair
I am the 'Stutes best
The Lady in Red
Will surly atest

There is no better
I cannot be beat
I've got Elvis' hip
And Baryshnikov's feet

So first prize is mine
A room with a view
Dear Lady in Red
Can I share it with you?


Nurse Crachet
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19 posted 2000-02-21 04:36 PM


Is anybody here, hello
I need my soft pillow?
HHHHelllo, III'mm III'mm
nnnott fffeeeelliing ggood.

Lady in Red
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since 2000-02-16
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20 posted 2000-02-21 05:38 PM


With shimmy and shakes
Are the moves that he makes
He is the 'Stutes best
To that I atest
He cannot be beat
He has Baryshnikov's feet
And the Elvis' hip
What showmanship !
He struck my nerves
First prize he deserves
A room with a view ? How profuse !
Are you looking for a bruise ?




 Romeo, Romeo, where fart art thou

Nurse Crachet
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since 1999-09-27
Posts 318
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21 posted 2000-02-21 10:35 PM


"Juliet, Juliet where are you?"
I wonder where my beautiful
little girl is, last I saw
she was picking daisy's
in the field across the street.
She is so sweet and loves
the color red,
that reminds me
I have a present for her
resting on my bed.

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