The shadow that rips itself apart...

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Open Poetry #6

The shadow that rips itself apart...

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-02-19 01:23 PM

shaking because theres nothing
left to hold on to this
believing for the season
my only reason
for not picking up this mess
sparing all the time
alone ..wishing you never were
a self imposed ripped apart
shadow of a diseased and desperate heart...

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

1 posted 2000-02-19 03:48 PM

Bitterness so accurately portrayed...good read, Jackal.

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

2 posted 2000-02-19 05:05 PM

Good read indeed my friend

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

3 posted 2000-02-20 02:25 PM

Hi Jackal,

Yes we all have to endure periods of bitterness, but it is the first step back to happpiness.
I liked your poem.

Cerenity-1

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