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Open Poetry #6

An ending? A begining?

Glorfindel
Junior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 22
Auckland, New Zealand

0 posted 2000-02-19 08:59 AM

So when was the ending?
It never came but once I swear.
Immensly small and intrinsically vague,
it gets nothing from me.

All in black and white,
paradox of coinhabitance,
creeping sandy mayhem,
under my locked front door.

Understandable?ha...
It lives in ambiguity,
with no thought in no mind,
a rational wave of chaos.

Lifted up you are,
the sky plowed by euphoria....
then below is up, the always ending,
eyes smarting from the grounds slap.

But pay it no heed, if you dare,
impartial as uncaring,
the sand owns more sympathy,
holding you, crying...

Take heed, a deed done,
a memory of one
more horrible, long gone,
to another lost soul.

A handful grab and stand,
stinking, soaking, singing, smiling,
A wide stride to the edge,
to cry...once...more.

Let winds rage, seas boil and years curse,
My love shal live everyoung in my verse.

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

1 posted 2000-02-20 12:40 PM

Hi there Glorfindel.

I'm not sure but are you speaking of an end relationship? One you would like to think is not worth crying over, but find it hurts you more than you would like???

I did like this poem anyway no matter if my reply is wrong. Welcome to Passions

Cerenity-1

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