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A White Horse Calling
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A White Horse Calling |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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White horse, moonlight-- inviting tonight-- silver-tipped fog delight-- gun-metal, slipping in and out-- savor taste desired... next-best-thing to a silent shout-- feeling now expired. A rose in full, drops a petal-- then yearns to be all together. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I really enjoyed this poem. Lots to be drawn from it. Especially liked the ending. Michael |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you, my friend, for tending to such lonely business tonight...I understand... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
aye the last two lines were all i understood but lo they were killer and i know i liked it much |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Hey, I like this. Very lovely. Very sensual. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
wayoutwalt, you are not that way out... Glad I could strike a chord... Marge: I am always thrilled to hear from you. Happy, a bit, that you caught the sensuality of it all, but it is RELUCTANT sensuality... |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
I've read this a few times and feel something different everytime. Not sure how to describe it but like what it does to me. Well Done Rich |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Love all of this. Really love this quote: |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Ali....this is sooooooo serendipitous of you. I was just telling a Pipfriend that I really don't care for my own words, but that I've written a couple of lines that I don't hate so much. What you quoted above is exactly what I'd quoted to him--and I probably like that line because it so aptly describes how I feel about myself... I think that most people have figured out that beneath all of my jokes and humor, there is an underground river of sadness and regret. I used to imagine being someone else, but then, what would become of baby Karen, eh? *hearthugs* Only someone who feels that same pain would choose such a line. I want you to know that I think you're lovely, inside and out. Thank you for digging through the archives to reach through the screen to find...me.  |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
What a treasure of you there is to find. Does that make sense? xoxoxo A |
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