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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas 
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If I can take my pen in hand- And take you to a distant land. Or with my words bring forth a tear Or make you feel, or make you hear- A whippoorwill, or robin sing- Or see the blossoms Born of Spring..... Or let you feel my heart and mind And tell of things I’ve left behind. Or paint a scene of desert land... To where you, too, can see the sand- And watch the sun sink in the West And make you also long to rest- Astride your horse, on canyon rim- Behold the beauty wrought by Him! And let you see things through my eyes I guess that I might well surmise... In spite of barbs cast by the rest- If you’re inspired, I have success. Visit My Home Page http://www.geocities.com/montcogunslinger/HomePage.html |
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WolfsMate Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 121New York |
Excellent verse. Enjoyed this very much! "You never have to worry...Never fear for I am near" |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Indeed you do, my friend...  |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Yep, agree with Nan on this one. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Gunslinger, This poem is great and needs to be on the front page I believe. I look forward to more of your work I think it might be a very wonderful ride. Cerenity-1 |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Yet again another wonderful tapestry of words. I like it, and yes, you do! "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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