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I loved you
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I loved you |
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Brent Hotchkin Junior Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 42Florida,USA |
I loved you. Before we kissed, Before we touched, Before you entranced, Before we lust. Before we knew of pleasures untold, I could clearly see. That beneath your breasts lied the key. To the depths of my soul. That would someday set me free. Where is this place you take me? Where the earth meets the stars. I am not sure, but I know it’s only ours. It looks as if it’s here we’ll play. When your near the world seems so far away. I see heaven in your eyes. I feel your words before you speak, And when your smile on me. My heart gets weak. What is this feeling? I’ve never met anyone above you. It must be, because, I love you! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Yep, it definately sounds like love. Enjoy it! |
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cK Navarro Junior Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 21Helsinki Finland |
Yeah must be love, what else there could be but that. That´s mostly why we are all here stuck day and night in Passions, don´t you agree? Nice poem keep going! Greetings from the other side of the world cK |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Yep...this is just oozzzing with love-sick man! LOL Now I know why you keep some of these poems in your black book. I think your book resembles mine a great deal! hehe All the things that make me seem vulnerable are in there....  Very nice read! |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Very very very nice read. I liked this one alot. Thanks for sharing it with us. Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Brent, Its been a long time since somebody did that to me. I miss it greatly. Great poem. Parker |
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Brent Hotchkin Junior Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 42Florida,USA |
Thank you all. Yup that was one of those moments you hope never goes away, but most of the time they do. I am glad I captured it because it helps me find my way when I get lost or "loose it" I am so happy that I found this site and you guys to share with. |
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babeluv73 Junior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 19 |
hello my love. i just want to tell you how happy i am to be intertwined in your heart. i love you. Theresa (the love you wrote the poem about) [This message has been edited by babeluv73 (edited 04-10-2000).] |
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star 15 Junior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 26 |
great poem i enjoyed it. love those kind of poems |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Geesh, for a minute I thought you had posted a new poem here, and I got all excited! LOL Although I've already commented on this one, I will add, that I do believe you know what love is - this poem portrays that for a fact. To have real love, it takes TWO people working on it though...I wonder - - were you alone in your feelings here? I kind of get that vibe...Psst...since you are JUST like me, I know your passions that you speak of, I'm not just taking sides here. That's why my faith is in you...as I don't "know" her. You understand. Still a passionate poem sir! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sounds like love to me  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Love does all that! *S* This is great! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I like the effects that spring air has on you.It brings out all romantic notions in your poetry. This was very passionate and loving and well written Liz |
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babeluv73 Junior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 19 |
Jennifer, you shouldn't pass judgment on people you don't know. i don't expect you to understand the message because it wasn't intended for you. Hey babe, i love the poem and i love you. Thank you for everything, especially your understanding..."i'll love you till the last star burns out." Theresa [This message has been edited by babeluv73 (edited 04-10-2000).] |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Brent, what a wonderful poem, I really enjoyed it. You create some strong images. Joanna |
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