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Rain Drops |
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MoonOnTheOcean New Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 8 |
As I walk through the rain I feel each drop hit my skin. Time is so slow, there is an eternity between each drop. I can't feel myself walking. I fall to the ground. With my eyes still open, All I see is darkness in the rain. A dreary night for a soul to lose it's spark. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Welcome to Passions, Moon. You seem to be very in touch with the beauty of Mother Nature in your writing. That is wonderful and I love it. Hope that soul finds the spark soon. Very sad indeed. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Wonderful Poem Moon, I also love walking in the rain*S* The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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