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Epiphany - The Poem
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Epiphany - The Poem |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
One of the features of the main site I enjoy most is reading why a poet wrote a poem, what inspired the poem. I wanted to share my inspiration for this poem with you as I thought it was a unique happening. I was looking up a word in the dictionary and came across this word: Epiphany:A sudden manifestation of the essence or meaning of something. A comprehension or perception of reality by means of a sudden intuitive realization: “I experienced an epiphany, a spiritual flash that would change the way I viewed myself” (Frank Maier). I loved the way it sounded. It rolled off my tongue. And the quote by Frank Maier struck a cord in me. I would love an epiphany! And what would happen if someone had one? How would their life be affected? This train of thought developed into something a little unusual. A two part story that I’ve posted in the Prose Forum. But it also begged to be said in poetic form. So here, is the poetic story of a child’s epiphany. If you are intrigued enough, please read the story (in two parts as it’s quite long) in the Prose Forum. I thank you in advance. She came into my young life When I had but a child’s care And when she left that summer day Part of her remained with me there. The years passed and I Remembered her sometime And now I want to introduce Her here, within my rhyme Her name was Epiphany Within her was God’s glow I met her only once you see But her heart was easy to know She traveled on foot from town to town Never staying long in one place Her clothes were worn and tattered As was her weathered face. An uncaring child I was then Thoughtless and unkind But one afternoon with Epiphany Changed my heart and changed my mind And now in my freedom I vowed to spread this tale To bring the world her story In this I shall not fail Love others as you would your own Treat everyone with respect Don’t judge on color or creed On this you must reflect If you walk a mile in the shoes Of another of God’s own Would you then belittle them For the seeds that they have sown? Life is not just about Money and superiority Life is about believing in Being someone’s epiphany |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Very nice story and poem you have here! Enjoyed very much. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Brent Hotchkin Junior Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 42Florida,USA |
Your last stanza is so so true . We all know the truth but it is rare that one of us lives it. I enjoyed your epiphany. Thanks for sharing. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
As soon as I thought I had some time There in the background the dinner chime Your poem so sweet and of importance it is Deserves a better reply than this Very nice poem Sharon, I'm inspired by the last stanze too The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful, wise and thoughtful poem. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
AMEN! This is wonderful, Sharon! Simply wonderful! When my computer is again up to speed I will check out your prose pieces!  Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Poet deVine, This could be a major poem, you are off to a good start. I really enjoyed the read. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Stepping outside of our own insular world to see through the eyes of another - is surely one of the most difficult tasks we could endeavor.... This is a wonderful reminder, PdV... I'll be off to Prose now..  |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
WOW!!So Much said In one poem. Leave`s me with alot to think about. Now I`ll have to read the rest. Thank you PoetdeVine for such a powerful,heart warming read  Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Well, PdV, you have done it again. Another work of art from someone who just oozes talent I look foreward to reading more. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Devine you've out done yourself! Most excellent and one heck of a message! You do us proud! <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for your kind words. As I said, if you'd like to, you can read the full story in Prose...but it's long..2 parts! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I did love this so, wonderful poem, I shall read the prose also I'm sure it's as delightful. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
I have truly enjoyed this piece pdv...very much I have. Thanks for a truly great read and a wonderful message. Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
PdV, I received the prose in my email and was moved beyond comprehension and the poem is beautiful. I too love the last stanza and highly recommend everyone to read the prose as well. Very well written (both pieces) and very thought provoking. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A wonderful poem, PdV. Especially the ending. *sigh* Maybe someday. Michael |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
poet yuh mite know it but i love yuh every words |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
PDV: I logged on this morning to find the prose in my email... and it's incredible.... don't apologize for it being long when every word is a gem! I'd intended to send you an email, but being the addict I am had to check poetry first. *S* And the poem is lovely, too!The briefest of encounters may profoundly effect our lives... I don't think any of us will forget Epiphany or Carrie... Well done! And WhtDove: Thank you for making sure I didn't miss these treasures!! *S* |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Sharon...I read your prose pieces first then saw this poem. All of these writings are wonderful and I am glad I read them. I hope everyone takes the oportunity to go to the prose forum to read your Epiphany.  |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Poet deVine, excellant message, I must find the prose. Thanks for shareing. Parker |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I can only add my own "well written" to the other well-deserved comments here. You're good, deVine one. |
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dash rendor Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 21 |
Wonderful poem, i'll definitly find the prose story and read that. What a great way to choose a topic for a poem. Inspiration from the dictionary, beautiful. I'll have to try that. [This message has been edited by dash rendor (edited 02-19-2000).] |
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