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Dawn Eclipse
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0 posted 2000-02-12 06:13 PM



A Wind of dreams


The wind whispers softly across a silent pond
It carries a message for all to hear
Its musical voice softens all ears
to its thoughts and dreams for us to share.

Its message is simple
Its dreams as well
Friends are special.
They fill the emptiness within our lives.

The winds voice stretches far and wide
Echoing its message for all time.
I feel the wind now, wrapping me in its warm feeling
Its soothing touch blows away all my fears.

People have been searching for eternity
for something to fill the emptiness in their hearts.
In all that time of searching, the only thing that anyone has ever found to fill that spot...
is each other.



© Copyright 2000 Cassandra Roseen - All Rights Reserved
Chris Goodman
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1 posted 2000-02-12 06:29 PM


Dawn!
Hi, I hope your day is going well.  This poem reads true.  Only people can seperate warmth and lonliness.  I love people & there are alot of special, unique people in this world I have yet to meet.  Thanks for sharing.

Chris Goodman


 Blue Moon

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2 posted 2000-02-12 06:31 PM


Dawn Eclipse-
Welcome to Passion's.
Your poem says a lot about friends.
Friends are the best present
you can give yourself.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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JOY 14
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3 posted 2000-02-12 06:42 PM


Right you are.  Friends are needed, otherwise we might die of lonliness.  Welcome to Passions, Dawn Eclipse.  

Joy

Poet deVine
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4 posted 2000-02-12 06:43 PM


Welcome to the family! I agree with you ... friends are special...check your email for a message! I like your poem and look forward to reading more from you...  

Alwye
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In the space between moments
5 posted 2000-02-12 09:57 PM


Dawn- It was a surprise to see you post something, my friend!  I'm glad you did, this is wonderful.  Your words definitely ring true.  Friends forever.  

 *Krista Knutson*

One lives in the hope of becoming a memory.
~*Antonio Porchia*~

Dawn Eclipse
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6 posted 2000-02-12 10:11 PM


Thank you all for the reply!  I was bored today, and thought I'd try a post!  Thanks again.  

Dawn Eclipse


Dusk Treader
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7 posted 2000-02-13 01:30 AM


I didn't expect to see ya posting here either Cassie, but I'm glad that you did!  Excellent poem about an excellent subject.  Hope to see a lot more of you around here!  Come to Prose and post some of your work too, I know you have some so don't tell me you don't!  

 In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. -- Abrahm Simons


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8 posted 2000-02-15 08:19 PM


Bored or not - come here anyway! This is a really great poem - and welcome.

 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath

Gemini
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9 posted 2000-02-15 11:29 PM


Very lovely poem.
CMGrimm
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10 posted 2000-02-15 11:39 PM


Welcome Dawn, and thank you for allowing us to read this lovely poem.  Hope to read more of you in the future.

Chris

vandana
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11 posted 2000-02-16 11:16 AM


I like this a lot.Keep it up!!!!!
devina
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12 posted 2000-02-16 12:19 PM


I can feel myself floating in the wind!! excellent piece...welcome!!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Corazon
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13 posted 2000-02-16 02:21 PM


welcome....nice poem...wind and dreams....ahhhh....very nice
Nan
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14 posted 2000-02-17 07:35 AM


All we have is each other - for sure...
Nicely said, Dawn
Welcome to our Passionate world...

January Flowers
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15 posted 2000-02-17 08:45 AM


Great entrance into our circle of friends!
Welcome, Dawn, to Passions!

Brent Hotchkin
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16 posted 2000-02-19 10:51 PM


Very cool!! I agree. eachother and love is all we need. I must look for more of yours
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