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A Kiss Before Dying
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A Kiss Before Dying |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
A Kiss Before Dying Waken “Child of Darkness” from the point of no return A soulless creature in Hell you forever burn Skin transparent pale winter white Seeks victims unsuspecting in the black of night Footprints soft and silent, never will they hear Powers from the crypt, it is you that they fear Warm flow of blood, thirst too lust Powerless to fight, relax in your touch Pounce the tiger with fangs of death Useless struggles to draw one last breath Feed upon mortals forever stay alive Thrill of the kill in this you thrive Offer the gift , or to let die Life’s red blood wine drunk till dry The master at work chills to the bone In misery’s moon never walk alone Creatures of darkness softly sighing Forever offer a last kiss before dying Marina Feb 18/2000 |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
wow marina! This is truly macabre - very nicley put together. Yanno, if you posted your peekshure in here, I could say the same about you (either you're macabre looking, or nicely put together - lol). |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
LingJhnAg:Thank-you. You certainly have me very curious now, I'm interested as to what you think I may look like....and please be creative... Marina |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I like the title and the verse. The life of the Vampire, so well described in your poem. Nicely written as well. Danny |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Sent chills down my spine, Marina! Corinne |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Danny and Corrine: thanks to you both. I think the title you choose can make an impact to your poem. Marina |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
chilling |
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