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Wizzard
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0 posted 2000-02-14 09:10 PM


WANTED:




Clean,Large,Loving Home
With plenty of room to play,
Someone that like`s to cuddle
And won`t use the word`s
Shut up,sit or stay,

You must have alot of patient`s
And promise not to yell,
If when I come in from playing,
I put off an unpleasant smell,

I can offer you all my love
A love that`ll never stray,
As long as you promise to feed me
Two or three time`s a day,

I`ll try to keep myself clean
And always stay by your side,
And when you want me to listen
I promise not to hide,

And all I`ll ask for in return
Is for some lovin everyday,
And let me get a dog
To protect you while Im away.



I know this poem has nothing to do with Valentine`s but,

Happy Valentine`s Day Passion




    

< !signature-->

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.




© Copyright 2000 Wizzard - All Rights Reserved
Wizzard
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1 posted 2000-02-15 02:08 AM


Im sorry but I couldn`t let this slip away without even one reply
So back for one more try.


 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


devina
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Cali
2 posted 2000-02-15 02:47 AM


This is very cute!!!! I think the only reason no one is replying to this is because Ron asked all passion members to please limit our replies today due to the rush of Valentines visitors looking for poems.  Just give this one till tomorrow...too cute to resist!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

tracie66
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3 posted 2000-02-15 03:09 AM


Ah wiz great poem but somehow I thought it might end the way it did...Loved it! Tracie(mommy)tee hee  
christies heart
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4 posted 2000-02-15 06:42 AM


Very cute. I could see this one going on and on. Add children to the mix!  
Wizzard
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5 posted 2000-02-15 10:35 AM


Devina,
ooops..That would explane why the post were moving so slow last night.
Thank you for reading and replying

Tracie,
That predictable huh?
Thank for reading and the reply (mommy)  

C.H.,
Add kid`s or puppies?lol
Thank you for readin and replyin

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
6 posted 2000-02-15 11:29 AM


Where do I apply  
CMGrimm
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USA
7 posted 2000-02-15 11:33 AM


Great Wizard. Very cute.  You brought a smile to my morning.

Chris

jascanvey
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8 posted 2000-02-15 01:09 PM


Aw lovely Wizzard!!
SEA
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9 posted 2000-02-15 01:43 PM


Wizzard~ very adorable! This is sweet! -SEA
Wizzard
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10 posted 2000-02-15 02:19 PM


Hoot,
You already have

CMG,
any time I can give someone a smile,I can smile myself Thank you.

Jascanvey,
Thank you for reading and replying

Sea,
aaawwww shuck`s
thank you for your kind reply.

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


suthern
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11 posted 2000-02-15 02:37 PM


I enjoyed! *G*
Wizzard
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12 posted 2000-02-15 03:39 PM


Thanx for reading and your reply Suthern Im glad you liked

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


Meadowmuse
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13 posted 2000-02-15 04:46 PM



Wizzard, how could anyone resist??  

Precious poem, and swell presentation!
Good Boy! Good Boy!

Wizzard
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14 posted 2000-02-15 05:46 PM


LOL,Good Boy is ok,just as long as your not saying "shut up,sit or stay"  
Thank you Meadowmuse,Im glad you dropped in to read.
Thank You


 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


Nurse Crachet
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They know where I am!
15 posted 2000-02-15 05:58 PM


If you can dance
come to the Corner Pub...LOL
This here nurse
is looking for a partner.
No perfect one's
come through the door yet...LOL

Loved your poem,
hope you find
your Valentine.

freckles
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since 2000-02-12
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Virginia USA
16 posted 2000-02-15 06:51 PM


Awww Wizzard, I can't imagine anyone being able to resist that; I absolutely loved it!

[This message has been edited by freckles (edited 02-15-2000).]

Munda
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The Hague, The Netherlands
17 posted 2000-02-15 07:31 PM


I loved this Wizzard !     And I don't have a dog yet.....where's the application form ?  
Wizzard
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18 posted 2000-02-15 09:57 PM


Nurse,Im sorry but I don`t know where the
corner pub is.
Kiddin
Thank you for reading and your kind reply

Freckles,Thank you as well,Im glad that you liked this

And Munda,
As for your app. well you don`t need one
Thank you for reading and your kind reply


 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


Gemini
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Wisconsin, USA
19 posted 2000-02-15 10:57 PM


A very charming piece, I enjoyed it very much.  
PhaerieChild
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Aloha, Oregon
20 posted 2000-02-16 02:14 AM


Wizzard, very cute! Brought a smile to this old face and believe you me it was needed. Thanks for the grins.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho



faith
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21 posted 2000-02-16 02:52 AM


Hey W that wwas cuute faith
hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA
22 posted 2000-02-16 09:17 AM


*looks to make sure she filled out the application properly, would hate to be turned down on a technicality, wonders what the adoption fees consist of  *


Wizzard
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23 posted 2000-02-16 05:24 PM


Gemini,
Thank you for reading and your kind reply      

WildChild,
Any time that I can make someone smile,I can smile myself.
Thank you for replying      

Faith,
thank you for your kind reply.Im glad that you liked      

Hoot_owl,
For you,all fees have been waved.
I can see from your writing`s that you are a sweet,gentle young lady and one who would provide a loving home for this lil puppy      


just_another_fe
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24 posted 2000-02-16 05:31 PM


LOL THANK FOR THE SMILE WIZZ. ITS GREAT  
Wizzard
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25 posted 2000-02-17 01:39 AM


Just_another_fe,
Your welcome
Thank you for reading and for another kind responce

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
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Arkansas
26 posted 2000-02-17 04:36 PM


LOL - You'll never guess, but I read this thinking you were talking about yourself!  LOL  Some people kid like that ya know...So are you house-broken??  hehe

Hey, I love all the graphics you use too, BTW...
Makes for a very colorful read!  Will be keeping my peepers out for more of your stuff.  

Wizzard
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27 posted 2000-02-17 04:42 PM


LMAO...
What kind of medication did you say you were taking?
I was talking about me..lmao
Thank`s again Poet..


< !signature-->

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


poetFemmeFatale
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28 posted 2000-02-17 04:48 PM


***  blushing 3 shades of stupid red    

Okay,  (crawling low to the ground ONCE again!)

Um...(hiding Mt. Dew behind back)  Maybe my drinks and Medications are colliding??  hehehe  So, I've read it again, and I see that you WERE indeed, talking about yourself.  ROFLMAO  Geesh, I should just sign off, and read later on when my meds have worn off, for I don't seem to be "grasping" much of what I read!  HA HA HA  
You have certainly made me laugh today!  Thanks a million SIR...err...do you hit the papers when you pee?  LOL  I HATE that......eewww.....  

Wizzard
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29 posted 2000-02-17 04:55 PM



You have givin me a much needed laugh as well.
NO, don`t sign off,Im just starting to have some fun.
And I try to hit the paper....but the paper isn`t always in the right place  < !signature-->

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


ill_tactics
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30 posted 2000-02-17 05:51 PM


heheh, this is cute.  I want of those and a dog.  The paper is nothing without words.  Much love, One love, PEACE
Wizzard
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31 posted 2000-02-18 05:17 PM


ILL_TACTICS,
Thank you for reading and responding

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


passing shadows
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displaced
32 posted 2004-05-21 03:10 AM


good write
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