Open Poetry #6 |
Well Trained and House Broken |
Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
WANTED:Clean,Large,Loving Home With plenty of room to play, Someone that like`s to cuddle And won`t use the word`s Shut up,sit or stay, You must have alot of patient`s And promise not to yell, If when I come in from playing, I put off an unpleasant smell, I can offer you all my love A love that`ll never stray, As long as you promise to feed me Two or three time`s a day, I`ll try to keep myself clean And always stay by your side, And when you want me to listen I promise not to hide, And all I`ll ask for in return Is for some lovin everyday, And let me get a dog To protect you while Im away. I know this poem has nothing to do with Valentine`s but, Happy Valentine`s Day PassionToday is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Im sorry but I couldn`t let this slip away without even one reply So back for one more try. Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is very cute!!!! I think the only reason no one is replying to this is because Ron asked all passion members to please limit our replies today due to the rush of Valentines visitors looking for poems. Just give this one till tomorrow...too cute to resist!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Ah wiz great poem but somehow I thought it might end the way it did...Loved it! Tracie(mommy)tee hee |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
Very cute. I could see this one going on and on. Add children to the mix! |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Devina, ooops..That would explane why the post were moving so slow last night. Thank you for reading and replying Tracie, That predictable huh? Thank for reading and the reply (mommy) C.H., Add kid`s or puppies?lol Thank you for readin and replyin Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Where do I apply |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Great Wizard. Very cute. You brought a smile to my morning. Chris |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
Aw lovely Wizzard!! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wizzard~ very adorable! This is sweet! -SEA |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Hoot, You already have CMG, any time I can give someone a smile,I can smile myself Thank you. Jascanvey, Thank you for reading and replying Sea, aaawwww shuck`s thank you for your kind reply. Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I enjoyed! *G* |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Thanx for reading and your reply Suthern Im glad you liked Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Wizzard, how could anyone resist?? Precious poem, and swell presentation! Good Boy! Good Boy! |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
LOL,Good Boy is ok,just as long as your not saying "shut up,sit or stay" Thank you Meadowmuse,Im glad you dropped in to read. Thank You Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
If you can dance come to the Corner Pub...LOL This here nurse is looking for a partner. No perfect one's come through the door yet...LOL Loved your poem, hope you find your Valentine. |
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freckles Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 160Virginia USA |
Awww Wizzard, I can't imagine anyone being able to resist that; I absolutely loved it! [This message has been edited by freckles (edited 02-15-2000).] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I loved this Wizzard ! And I don't have a dog yet.....where's the application form ? |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Nurse,Im sorry but I don`t know where the corner pub is. Kiddin Thank you for reading and your kind reply Freckles,Thank you as well,Im glad that you liked this And Munda, As for your app. well you don`t need one Thank you for reading and your kind reply Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
A very charming piece, I enjoyed it very much. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Wizzard, very cute! Brought a smile to this old face and believe you me it was needed. Thanks for the grins. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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faith Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 89 |
Hey W that wwas cuute faith |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
*looks to make sure she filled out the application properly, would hate to be turned down on a technicality, wonders what the adoption fees consist of * |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Gemini, Thank you for reading and your kind reply WildChild, Any time that I can make someone smile,I can smile myself. Thank you for replying Faith, thank you for your kind reply.Im glad that you liked Hoot_owl, For you,all fees have been waved. I can see from your writing`s that you are a sweet,gentle young lady and one who would provide a loving home for this lil puppy |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
LOL THANK FOR THE SMILE WIZZ. ITS GREAT |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Just_another_fe, Your welcome Thank you for reading and for another kind responce Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
LOL - You'll never guess, but I read this thinking you were talking about yourself! LOL Some people kid like that ya know...So are you house-broken?? hehe Hey, I love all the graphics you use too, BTW... Makes for a very colorful read! Will be keeping my peepers out for more of your stuff. |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
LMAO... What kind of medication did you say you were taking? I was talking about me..lmao Thank`s again Poet.. < !signature--> Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
*** blushing 3 shades of stupid red Okay, (crawling low to the ground ONCE again!) Um...(hiding Mt. Dew behind back) Maybe my drinks and Medications are colliding?? hehehe So, I've read it again, and I see that you WERE indeed, talking about yourself. ROFLMAO Geesh, I should just sign off, and read later on when my meds have worn off, for I don't seem to be "grasping" much of what I read! HA HA HA You have certainly made me laugh today! Thanks a million SIR...err...do you hit the papers when you pee? LOL I HATE that......eewww..... |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
You have givin me a much needed laugh as well. NO, don`t sign off,Im just starting to have some fun. And I try to hit the paper....but the paper isn`t always in the right place < !signature--> Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
heheh, this is cute. I want of those and a dog. The paper is nothing without words. Much love, One love, PEACE |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
ILL_TACTICS, Thank you for reading and responding Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write |
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