Valentine's Day (un)Sonnet

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Open Poetry #6

Valentine's Day (un)Sonnet

jcthaman
Junior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 22
Hershey, PA, USA

0 posted 2000-02-07 09:03 PM

hehe, everyone i have just found out that i seemed to skip over the 10 syllable rule in a shakespearean sonnet, so this is no longer a sonnet, it is simply a love poem (although i will try to fix it into a real one)

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As I sit here on my bed,
this peaceful valentine's eve,
thoughts of you fill my head,
and it makes me believe
that you were meant for me
and we should be together.
I've never seen such beauty,
I want this to last forever.
I've never met someone so perfect,
and with you I feel so good.
How this ends I can't predict,
I'd give you the world if I could.
I pray that this love is true,
All I want is to be with you.

think she'll like it?

[This message has been edited by jcthaman (edited 02-08-2000).]

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

1 posted 2000-02-07 09:09 PM

This was beautiful...just remember that what you're feeling now will deepen as you get older!!!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 2000-02-07 11:53 PM

Wow! What wonderful thoughts! She'll love it I'm sure!

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When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 2000-02-08 11:20 AM

She'd be a fool not to

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

4 posted 2000-02-08 11:23 AM

I think she will love it

Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2000-02-12 07:03 AM

A lovely peaceful valentines eve. James

Tasi
Junior Member

since 2000-02-08

Posts 38
Canada

6 posted 2000-02-12 11:02 AM

Simplistically lovely ...what every woman wants to hear

well said !!

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