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Hawaiin Paradise
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Hawaiin Paradise |
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Bbuzz Member
since 1999-12-17
Posts 76Washinton State |
We sit out on the balcony, The sun comes up so warm. The birds sing us a melody, New thoughts begin to form. Of beaches, white with sparkling sand, Of fragrances so sweet. Of palm trees swaying from the land And coming hours of heat. Of lazing in the warm, moist air Savoring the slendor. Drinking tall cool glasses there Of fruits joined in the blender. Of playing in the ocean waves, Then warming in the sun. Becoming new beachcombing slaves Until each day is done. Of dining on exotic fish Whos names we've never heard. Sampling each and every dish, New taste buds being stirred. Of lazy nights , with pleasant dreams Of peaceful, content rest. We're in paradise, it seems! Oh God, How we've been blessed. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bev- I can't make it to Hawaii, but this sure makes me want to head to the Florida Keys and watch the sunset at Mallory Square, sipping a pineapple frappe`. Beautiful imagery. ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 02-06-2000).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You just took me to paradise. I can taste that cool brew. Are we in Margaridaville? Enjoyed the poem Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I could sure use a nice trip to that warm inviting place! Lovely poem! Denise |
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Bbuzz Member
since 1999-12-17
Posts 76Washinton State |
Marge, We've never been to Florida, but any place we can be in shorts in the winter sounds wonderful! I can still see and feel it all! Thank you for your comments. Bev Liz, How did you know about the margarita's? Could you see us? We raised our glasses to you! LOL Thank you, Bev Thank you Dsnyder! I wish I could send you there! It was WONDERFUL! I miss it still. Bev |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Being Australian I have longed to go to Hawaii for years. Your poem only makes me want to go there more and NOW! I'm thrilled you had such a lovely time there.  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Bbuzz, this took me on a mini vacation! Sounds like Bliss!  Great visions with beautiful words! -SEA |
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Bbuzz Member
since 1999-12-17
Posts 76Washinton State |
Thank you both Isis and SEA! I was FILLED with poetry, so more to come! LOL. It was indeed paradise! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
We're out there having fun in the warm Hawaiian sun. I have notice that the ones who already have a paradise of love and beauty in their hearts are the ones that experience the most enjoyment and pleasure on this Hawaiian Paradise. I love the palm tree fronds swaying in the breeze also. James |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Bev, yet another great poem you have here! Still wish I was there too! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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Bbuzz Member
since 1999-12-17
Posts 76Washinton State |
Thank you James and Echo Rhayne. Quite a compliment from you James! I'd say "it takes one to know one". Thank you again,both of you! Bev |
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aleisha Junior Member
since 2000-05-04
Posts 10 |
bbuzz this makes me want to hop on a plane today. Beautiful poem! |
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