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A Perfect Moment
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A Perfect Moment |
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Jasmine New Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 6 |
a smile spreads across his face as he looks up at me with his intense brown eyes that are filled with such a passion for life eyes that look right through my skin and find me beautiful for the first time in my life i begin to see myself in that same light almost as if i've shed my repulsive shell and emerged as something more deserving of being cared about i'm overcome with an unfamiliar emotion but i can't see to find the right words to express what i am feeling so i sit here silent with my eyes closed fearing that when they open this perfect moment will be over and he will be gone. -Jasmine |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Jasmine~ This is lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
OH, the excitement of the moment... and discovering yourself as the jewel in someone else's eyes. Agree with Marge, just lovely. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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