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In the Light of Love Above
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In the Light of Love Above |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
In the Light of Love Above Flowers forever fragrant, dance in bloom When Heaven’s glittery gate opens Birds beautiful harmony whistle their tune In the light of love above Hourglass of sand, no longer we will know In picturesque soft meadows of time Endless breezes of summer’s show In the light of love above Forever souls of destiny in sunsets blush Colours radiant rainbow in June Beats for eternity in hearts humble hush In the light of love above Marina Feb 16/2000 |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
My gawd! This is beautiful! You make me feel like I've either died and gone to Heaven, or else, I've just fallen in love with Mr. Right.....geesh! I would like to say a big Welcome, and I look very forward to reading more of your poems, for you have a wonderful way of using words beautifully! |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
That was pretty, pretty excellent. The words are very vivid, and well stated. Made me feel calm and peaceful. Nice work, keep the imagination flowing, and capture it on paper. Much love, One love, PEACE |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Poetfemme: thankyou very much. Since the passing of my father I have often wondered what the world beyond is like. I just glad I was able to express my vision in a way that is enjoyable to others as well. But Mr. Right would be nice right about now too! Ill-tactics: I am glad you enjoyed it. However I'm usaully not so lucky in my images or flow. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I'm sure god reads poetry ... and I'm sure god would never change a word you have written here  Rex}<{{{{o> |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Rex: Thank-you,if God does read poetry then he also must have a sense of humour. Otherwise he would never allow me to post half of my stuff! |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Glorious! Excellent! If words had music this would be symphonic! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Julie: Thank-you, but there is nothing which holds a melody like Mother Nature can. Marina [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 02-17-2000).] |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Rex: I don't know about your end of Canada but, I would certainly appreciate it if God could take away some of this snow...in between poetry reading of course!! Marina |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marina, this poem is very nicely read. I agree with all the above comments. Parker |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James: Thanks. If there is a Heaven and Hell then I believe that living upon this earth is the test of hell and only you can choose your heaven when you reach " The Light of Love Above" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how beautiful! |
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