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From the Angry Sea
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From the Angry Sea |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Like a drowning child you were When I first found you Lost amid the same old lies And I was something new The weight of the waves Crashing down upon your head The quick passage of time Is the thing that you dread All this around us is real For every nerve is aware Of such beauty that is shining Like golden starlight in your hair They try to murder your hope And your heart begs mercy Because those precious moments Are remembered for eternity Nothing comes between us And nothing ever will When I rescued you from the angry sea, You realized a love that time will never kill |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JML, again, beautiful. I just really enjoy your poetry.  -SEA |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
SEA, I'm glad someone does. Its so good that someone gets it. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JML, I do get it, and it's so very touching to me. You really touch my heart. -SEA |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Your comments are better than anything. I will keep these coming. I somehow like my older stuff more than any new ones that gradually come out every now and then. JML |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
very beautiful poem. Just remember the sea can be angry, but very serene. Kinda reminds me of love. Keep em' coming. Much love, One love, PEACE |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Marley fan? I am.....let's get together and feel alright. He's the coolest. Thanks, ill. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Like a drowning child you were When I first found you Lost amid the same old lies And I was something new The weight of the waves Crashing down upon your head The quick passage of time Is the thing that you dread All this around us is real For every nerve is aware ------------ Because those precious moments Are remembered for eternity Nothing comes between us And nothing ever will When I rescued you from the angry sea, You realized a love that time will never kill ------------- I hope you dont mind me bringing an old one up...this one is perfect for my thoughts tonite... beautiful, sincere poem of understanding. i love the way your mind works...  stalking your old ones *S* your jm she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough, and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in. ...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me... and I feel like somethings gonna give... and I'm a little bit angry. matchbox20 |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent poem, JML. Another one I missed when I was having computer problems awhile back. Thanks for bringing it back up, Janet Marie! |
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