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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
did you look into me and did you see my thoughts did you stop to think about the love for which i sought did you open your arms did you open your heart but did you open your eyes to see mine from the start did you see the pain the hurt that fills me so did you stop the rain or do you help it flow did you see me, know me before you said you loved me did you feed your soul to me or did you simply show me can i turn around now do i even want to try can i shut the flood gates of the love that is inside Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
OHHHHH.....I like I like!  |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Powerful words...screams of betrayel of trust. I wish I could tell you how to shut those floodgates, imfortunately I never could figure that one out myself. Great poem, even still. Michael |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
My love still overflows with the floodgates closed.... Guess the love I have will never find the ocean that awaits. I like this poem, its nice. Let your pen guide you, cuz on paper is where the words of wisdom sit. Much love, One love, PEACE |
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