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A Poetic Hiding Place
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A Poetic Hiding Place |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
"One, Two, Three, Four..." Hurry! Hurry! Come quickly as you can! I've been thinking of a place since before the counting began. This place, it's the best, this I know. I think it's a place after me, everyone will follow. My heart is racing, I can't catch my breath! Only four more counting numbers are left. Up, up, up...climb into the poetry. I'm sure my friends would never guess in here I'd be. "Seventeen, Eighteen, Nineteen, Twenty! Ready or not, here I come!" Steady now. I'm trying not to breath as my friend in poetry searches for the meanings underneath. |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Just some fun with our forum! Ever feel like you've found the perfect "hiding place" where you can be yourself and not be judged? This forum reminds me of the "excitement" of finding a brand new hiding place... unchartered waters... I hope you can relate! I'm proud to share this hiding place with you all! |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
I have found that it keep`s my mind busy. And yes it`s a great hiding place. I was told about this place by a dear friend of mine and it amazes me to see just how much it comforts another (myself included)to get feed back on what ever we post. Now,what or who is it that your hiding from? Nice job Miss.J.F.  < !signature--> Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. [This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-17-2000).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Kind of an interesting perspective on the forums. Most times I feel like this is the only place I can really be me, that my writing expresses what I cannot in "reality". Cute little poem - who's turn is it seek? Michael |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
This is lovely. Nobody can find me here. I've been hiding for quite some time now!  Joy |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
But....but.....Jan.....yassee?..I'm myself here? And sometimes it gets me in trouble, deleted, or chastised?....But, it's like my real life......so?....where do ya go?...I went to a psychiatrist...he just laughed his ass off at me?...I went to another therapist, he asked if I wanted a job?...I went to a sex therapist.....she fell in love with me?....Now then, all I have left is here?...Oh well....everyone's gotta be somewhere....right? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
January, Yes this is a marvalous place and the people are wonderful. It has been a haven for quite a few of us, a very positive place with lots of love. And I have become very addicted. Welcome to poets Shangri-la. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Laughing at Toe's response....Geesh. I think sometimes someone needs to censor that guy! LOL (covering up Moderator badge) hehehe This was a really neat poem girl! I will certainly look up more of yours to enjoy! Keep em coming! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
JF ... you have wonderful thoughts ... I'm still smiling Out on the newsgroups people had to e-mail each other to give a positive response but here you can state your feelings openly with little to fear Rex}<{{{{o> |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sweet poem for a wonderful place. |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Wizzard- Quite the contrary...not hiding! I share this forum haven with those I know. A great mix of exitement and healing I find in here, and often a great heap of laughs to boot. Michael- You can seek next if you'd like, I never did like the "finding" role...Glad you enjoyed this. Joy14- Ain't it grand? I'm beyond the addiction point here. Toe- Psychiatrists and sex therapists? Passion has become your "cure for all", eh? ROFL! If Ron only KNEW how much money he was saving you...Shhhhhh! I didn't say that. Hate for this forum to become lucrative for someone!  Seymour- Thanks for your comment. We all are but one (hee hee). PoetFemmeFatale- Glad you liked! Rex- Right on! That's what makes this forum go 'round. Martie- Thanks very much. Your comments mean a bunch! |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
J.F. IT was just a slip of the key in the passing.....I really didn`t mean any harm by it....You take care k? I`ll word my expressions in a......IM sorry. Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
This count is wonderful I was just wondering Where should i be writing In the adult poetry group They are so honest In the dark poetry They are so maybe I should be there In the poetry #6 They are so pure So where should I be In a time where I feel in heaven on earth in hell monique |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
WELL THEN, I GUESS THE NAME HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH THE READ???? OK...SORRY MISS.MAM And what does this mean?Ever feel like you've found the perfect "hiding place" hhhmmmm...seems to me,one of us have had a bit to much to drink...I no longer drink...so that leaves YOU.. goodluck [This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-18-2000).] |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
January Flowers, Hi Finding this place came in the nick of time for me, shangrila yes in every way, addiction is hitting it right on the button. Loved your poem. Cerenity-1 |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Looks like we're all on the same wave length here. Good poem Toe, why would you go to a therapists when you got me? Liz |
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