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To The One I Love
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To The One I Love |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois 
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 We've stood on mountains high Shared each others laughter And the pain each other'd cry We've fought many battles We've over came them all We've stood up together And together we'd fall We've traveled down life's road With all its twists and turns Not always listening To each others concerns You've reached out and touched me And you've made me feel whole With tenderness and caring You've touched deep in my soul What e're roads we travel Or what twists life might take I'm glad you're my partner You're my hearts keepsake God brought us together As two partners for life For us to grow stronger As a man and his wife I would've picked no other To walk with by my side You are my confidant My light, my loving guide I love you! |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
So sweet and heartfelt, this is wonderful. Makes me wish I had someone to call my own  I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, dovey! This is really nice and heartfelt. COngratulations on those feelings! |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Now Gir.. is this what came out of Ed saying I'm stuck with him...lol No Dove, this was truly beautiful.. This one needs a frame... in case ya need to throw it at him some night!!..lol... I know I'm bad bad bad..  got a love me.... If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is very touching, I hope he appreciates your talent as we do!!!!! (and let him know you deserve a candle lit diner and roses for this one hun!) Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhiteDove- I can feel the adoring love in this. What a wonderful poem ... especially with Valentine's Day just around the corner. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
What a beautiful & touching valentine. You write with the peace of someone who wants what he has...Lovely... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Trevor thanks! I appreciate that! One day you will find someone you love also! Not to easy, lots of ups and downs! But rewarding nontheless! Michael thanks! A long time coming that's for sure! It's wonderful I tell ya! ROFL @ you Tori! Actually he asked for a frame so he can hang it in his office. But hey, I have plenty hanging around here! hehe Just in case! LOL Love ya girl! Thanks!!!!!Devina how sweet! Thanks, I'll let him know. haha Marge thanks! Actually that's kind of why I wanted to write something for him. He has never had a poem from me, just to darn hard for me to come out with the words I want to say. I still didn't but this will have to do! He said he likes it, and thanked me and all. Serenity, I do want what I have. I thank God for what I have! Thank you! |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
shoot...you outta get a couple dozen roses for this....beau-ti-ful... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Majestic what a lovely thought. I'm not aimin for roses though! Thank you so much for your wonderful comment! I appreciate that!<*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WhtDove, this does belong in a frame, or on a poster; a loving Valentine's Day card. This is excellent! -SEA |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Incredibly beautiful sentiments Rebecca and I know you mean every word. So romantic!!! I love the last stanza! Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Angel honey this is most beautiful and heartfelt, brought tears to my eyes and a lump in my thoat!! beautiful writing Angel girl. *hugs* You Go Girl!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I can imagine this as handwritten wedding vows on the back of shopping receipts. But then, I've always had an "interesting" imagination. Thanks for sharing.Mike |
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Alias Junior Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 30 |
I really loved that poem White Dove, thanks. One day i hope I'll have a wife who loves me so much she'd post poetry for me.... Inspiration, dreams, love, your poem says it all. I wish your marriage all the best, Alias. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This kind of love grows stronger with age. You expressed it so beautifully. Liz |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
I said it afore, 'n' I'll say it ag'in! Awesome Becca! Beauty pouring from the heart this way is bound to renew his love in you! |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Of a love you speak so true and clear such lovely poem you've written dear I find your poem to such divine I would like to use it for my Valentine Very beautiful The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
This is so lovely WhtDove....a wonderful tribute of your love.. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Dovie...this is so very sweet...you must really love your mate.....(So, why don't ya drop the chump and come with me?).... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
SEA, this will be put in a frame, he wants to take it to work and hang it in his office...aww! Thank you, you're so kind. Thank you sweet Shawna! I do! DA, awww. Didn't mean to make ya cry Hugs to ya girl, luv ya!LOL bsquirrel, that is interesting... Alias thank you so much-I'm sure you'll find one you love, that will go to the ends of the earth for you! Liz, so far it has-hope it keeps going, none do without the up's and down's. Chris-thank you so much! hugs HelmutB, thanks! How sweet, and you may use it if you'd really like to. I'd be honored! Pepper, thank you so very much! Hugs Toe, toe, toe! ROFL!!! I'm honored Toe! But I'm kinda used to what I got now...Geez, I wouldn't wanna start all over ya know, took me 16 yrs...hehehe Thank you all very much, such a wide range of replies and compliments!  <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh this is beautiful....I hope it's a valentines day surprise |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
'becca, phew, I finally made my way to it! I told you it wasnt a syou were thinking it was, sheeeesh! Its great! Anyways, *hugs* glad to hear things have gotten better, I guess cleaning my toilet with his toothbrush paid off LoL j/k *hugs* Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautiful poem, Rebecca. It is quite a special feeling to "know" there is no other for you. A very touching owrk. michael |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Not only am I proud of your beautiful writing but your thoughtfulness, honesty and use of your talents. Great heartfelt wording, so very well done. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is such a love filled poem. I enjoyed it greatly. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thank you Ruth! Actually the only surprise was mine, that I wrote it. First the free verse came out, and then low and behold, this was next. He has it already framed and it's gonna go to work with him tomorrow. Thanks Ruth....HugsLOL Melanie! Maybe that's what did the trick ya think? haha...it's still not what I wanted. Thanks sweetie! Thank you Michael, I "know" that you have one of those too! Thank you Mom A bit biased or what? LOLReally thank you very much! Many thanks to you Martie! |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Rebecca, I just had to bounce you somewhere for Rosemary to catch a peek before computRONics makes a new page. Anybody seen him lately..? |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, how could I have missed this one! It's beautiful, loving, and right down my alley! This is one I will put in my special file of lovely poems to read again and again. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WOW! What a surprise to see this round again! Thanks Lucky! Can't say that I have, but I thought we'd have a new page a while back. Rosemary thanks so very much! It's an honor if someone likes it enough to read it more than once |
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