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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-02-17 09:37 AM

Forgive Me

Forgive me
for my actions,
blindness,
and craziness.
Forgive me
for my delight,
energy,
and foolishness.
Forgive me
for my games,
haste,
and insecurities.
Forgive me
for my jestering,
kidding,
and laughter
Forgive me
for my misguidance,
negativity,
and oblivion.
Forgive me
for my pressure,
questions,
and recklessness.
Forgive me
for my sadness,
temper,
and uneasiness.
Forgive me
for my vengeance,
wastefulness,
and xenophobia.
Forgive me
for my yearning,
zounds,
and grant me peace.

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2000-02-17 10:01 AM

i love the last lines these xyz poems are ketchy o yuh

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-02-17 10:03 AM

This is great Gloria! We human beings are a real mess, aren't we! Thank God He is so forgiving!

Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 2000-02-18 03:31 AM

Very very clever

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-02-18 06:39 AM

LostDreamer~
This is just wonderful.
Acrostically-contained.
Not easy to do ... and done with feeling.
Great.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

5 posted 2000-02-19 09:06 AM

My gosh, Gloria - You're all those things??? You must have some serious fun - I'm sure you're forgiven....

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

6 posted 2000-02-19 07:02 PM

and forgive me for loving this poem very much.

Parker

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

7 posted 2000-02-19 07:38 PM

Wayoutwalt: Thank You, I appreciat your reading and enjoying.

dsnyder: Thank You

Ruth: Thank You

Marge: Thank You, yes it did pose a challenge

Nan: Thank You, at one time or another not all together or I think I would be crazy...LOL

Haleyja: Thank You, your forgiven by me, glad you enjoyed it.

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

8 posted 2000-02-19 08:39 PM

Very, very clever, Dreamer! Most of the things you listed I call qualities, things which separate us from plants or trees....the essence of our personalities

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

9 posted 2000-02-19 09:05 PM

Balladeer: Thank You

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