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Dear Mama
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Dear Mama |
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Jason Danes New Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 5 |
Dear Mama, I'm lost and all alone I don't know what to do My dreaded fear has come to life She told me we were through Could you rock me in your arms And kiss my tears away? Or sing to me a lulaby And tell me it's OK I sit here all torn up inside My life has fell apart My one and all has left me now And broke my little heart Why did I grow up so fast To have to feel this pain? I'd rather be fighting with G.I. Joe Or playing football in the rain I always know I have you here When troubles come my way You always give me good advice And listen to what I say I've done what you told me And prayed to God above Dear mama please come and pray with me I've lost my only love |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
this is nice, sad but nice, you sound like you have a good momma ...welcome  |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Ooh, goosebumps. Great poem, especially since it is your first post. Welcome to Passions, may your stay be long and fruitful I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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Alina Le Ann Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 40INDIANA |
WOW!!!! This poem is awesome.... it brought tears to my eyes....VERY VERY well written! Alina Le Ann |
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Bbuzz Member
since 1999-12-17
Posts 76Washinton State |
Not much is as painful as the loss of a first love. I Remember. Well written poem Jason! Thank God for Mammas! |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Welcome to Passion What a poem you have presented I can relate to your feeling all to well Well done and so excusitly The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is soo sweet...I'm glad you've realized that mothers are ALWAYS good at healing pain, no matter the age!! Welcome to our family, this poem was absolutely wonderful!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a special welcome!  |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Ah, this is very beautiful, Jason. You're lucky you have such a loving mother. Joy |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
What a sweet poem. Welcome to Passions, Jason. Pull up a computer chair and stay a while. |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
Very beautiful, Jason....I can only hope that one day, in the future, my son will come to me for comfort, too, as youhave described in your poem....great job! Bobbycat =^..^= |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Welcome to Passions! Outstanding entrance if I do Say so my self. If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~ |
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Wolfgang Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 124Hamilton, Ont. Canada |
Naw you havn't Jason!! You've got Mama, and be sure you treat her real good! Well done. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jason, WELCOME!! You sure started good, making us Mommas' get all weepy! This is an excellent poem! When things are bad in my life, I remember my Mom rocking me. That is my safe place to go.  -SEA |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a great poem to bring your entrance to the site. Nicely done and welcome to passions |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
awwwwwww and welcome to the family! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Love my mommy too! Welcome to Passions! |
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PREACH Junior Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 20 |
I know the pain that you speek of in this poem all to well. And i liked how you gave the poem the twist of it coming from a very young man instead of an adult. To me it adds to the fact that the support from the mother is so important. I was wondering is this about you or did it just cross your mind. But great job. PREACH |
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Jason Danes New Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 5 |
Thank you all for your replies to my first entrance! This was a time that I have experienced here recently, in which my mom, as always helped me through. She cried too when I read it to her. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is really nice...wonderful poem to your Mom!! It is sooo sad though but I'm glad you have a friend in your Mom!! I often wish I wasn't an adult!! Welcome to Passions!! Take Care Bridgette Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Tomorrow brings a new day and the chance for a new love. What a great poem you have written for your Mom. Today is the first day of the rest of your life. |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
This is just sooo sweet!! Welcome to passions, may your stay be a long one!! |
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WilliamHugh Junior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 12MA |
wow, ouch, wonderful, sweet, touching |
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Kyttn Junior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 10MO |
What a sad and wonderful poem. :`( [This message has been edited by Kyttn (edited 02-10-2000).] |
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