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Wizzard
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0 posted 2000-02-17 03:41 AM


A Place In My Heart

It started with a bit of flirting
Soon after I became your friend,
Then it became an online love,
One I thought would never end,

The love I felt across the screen
Would take my breath away,
Just to wake and read your thought`s
Would get me thru my day,

Those day`s are in the past
But the memories still remain,
I hold a place for you in my heart,
A place that`s warm,kind and loving,
A place that know`s no pain.
Neither Distance Or Time Could Ever Erase The Memories
That True Friend`s Share.



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 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.




© Copyright 2000 Wizzard - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
1 posted 2000-02-17 03:42 AM


it tiz true poem i know this well very well done wizzard
Michael
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2 posted 2000-02-17 03:52 AM


I dream of such a place, Wizzard.  I hope to find one someday.  


Michael

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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Australia
3 posted 2000-02-17 04:08 AM


Wiz what a lovely poem, well done   (mommy)
Wizzard
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4 posted 2000-02-17 06:01 AM


Walt and Mommy (tracie),
Thank you for reading and replying.
This is one that I had started about a week ago and had forgotten about.
I just found it in a file and SHAZAM here it is.lol
Thanx you 2

Michael,
You already have a place like that.
It`s inside of your heart.It`s just that right now there`s something blocking your vision and once your able to see around that,you`ll find that place again.
Thank`s for reading and taking the time to respond...and Good Luck Michael

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
5 posted 2000-02-17 06:33 AM


It's amazing how much space
our hearts have to capture
friendships and memories.

Wonderful poem, glad you shared it with us.

January Flowers
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since 2000-02-01
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South Carolina
6 posted 2000-02-17 08:17 AM


Heartfelt
and
Lovely
in all it's meaning.

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
7 posted 2000-02-17 09:04 AM


Isn't it  wonderful to look back at an event
short or long and have a good feeling, one
with out any pain. I loved your poem.

christies heart
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since 1999-08-10
Posts 189
NJ, USA
8 posted 2000-02-17 09:15 AM


Very nice poem. It's true that the best way to know things are "real" in our hearts is to have them exist without any influences to tell us how we should feel. It is great that you can take the good from something and bring it with you wherever you go!
Meadowmuse
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9 posted 2000-02-17 09:17 AM


Wizzard,this piece holds such sweetened sentiments, and you've made a delightful presentation.   I so enjoy your work.

Claire

mete out
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england
10 posted 2000-02-17 10:56 AM


This poem is so beatutifully and eloquently put.
You are very lucky to have experienced these emotions.


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

Breathe~
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Washington...
11 posted 2000-02-17 11:00 AM


Those online loves/friends can mean so much...

Nice poem Wizzard!


 Freedom of expression is the watch word...


devina
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since 1999-10-28
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Cali
12 posted 2000-02-17 11:22 AM


This is beautifully written Wizzard!!! I can only agree with all my heart...

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Wizzard
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13 posted 2000-02-17 12:56 PM


Thank you,each and everyone of you for reading and responding to this
If not for friend`s and memories I don`t think I`d have much to smile about.
Thanx again Y`all



 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA
14 posted 2000-02-17 12:57 PM


This is very sweet Wizzard...but I'm not sure that place exists for me...a place that knows no pain
Wizzard
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15 posted 2000-02-17 03:30 PM


Hoot,with a heart as Big as your`s,Im sure there`s a peaceful place full of love in there
If your having trouble finding that place,you can alway`s come share mine with me
Thank you for your kind reply Ruth

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
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Arkansas
16 posted 2000-02-17 04:09 PM


Wizzard...this is really really warm.  Thank you for sharing SIR !  (wink)  Probably one of the prettiest LOVE poems I've read here around the holiday...
I see you too, have felt that mysterious warmth online.  I'm not sure how to feel about it now, but I have many warm memories as you do.  This brought a smile to my face.  ***curtsies to you

Wizzard
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since 2000-02-09
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17 posted 2000-02-17 04:18 PM


PoetFemmeFatale,
I thought that this was what had thrown you off on my sex...ya know male or female.lol
Thank you for your kind responce and Im glad that I was able to give you a smile


 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


ill_tactics
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 149

18 posted 2000-02-17 05:41 PM


Beautifully stated.  Nice poem wizzard.  I have lots of space in my heart, but the love that i need to keep it beating will not fill it.  Keep em' coming.  Much love, One love, PEACE
Wizzard
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since 2000-02-09
Posts 209

19 posted 2000-02-18 05:21 PM


ill_tactics,
Once again I wanna Thank you for your kind reply..I hope that your able to find that special love that`ll fill your heart.

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
20 posted 2000-02-18 05:38 PM


I have been enjoying your poetry very much. You write with your heart, and it is felt. I've read many of your poems, even though lately I haven't been able to respond, please know that I am reading them. This one is wonderful
Liz

Wizzard
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since 2000-02-09
Posts 209

21 posted 2000-02-18 07:37 PM


Elizabeth,
Thank you for the kind word`s.
It mean`s alot to me knowing that you take the time to read my writing`s
Your a very kind hearted lady....
Once again Thank you.

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
22 posted 2004-05-21 03:06 AM


beautiful!
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