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Open Poetry #6

A thousand miles

Nikkisweet
Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 183
Tx, Dallas

0 posted 2000-02-17 01:14 AM

The sun may not rise
The dark may not fall
But you will always
Be my All in all

The only thing that
Could keep me away from you
Is a thousand miles
Seperating us so very far

I could not walk
Nor swim or drive
For I'm just a kid
No way to get to you at all

So no matter how far apart we are
Even a thousand miles
I will always think of you
And hope you think of me too.

You're my future,my love, my life
So when I get older
A thousand miles
Will mean nothing to me.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2000-02-17 01:25 AM

The rhythm kinda flounders around a little, but I choose to think you did that on purpose to show how love acts the same way. Right? RRIIIIIGGGHHHHT?

Another fun read.

M.

Nikkisweet
Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 183
Tx, Dallas

2 posted 2000-02-17 01:26 AM

This is about my boyfriend I had for three years and he had to move a thousand miles away.

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

3 posted 2000-02-18 03:38 AM

Nikki sweet poem, you wrote that straight from the heart I could tell. True love can overcome great distances...Hugs Tracie

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

4 posted 2000-02-18 09:27 AM

A poem from the heart will always capture it's reader's heart Nikki...
You've captured mine here. Wonderful read. One of the sweetest sentiments I've read in a long time. Keep it up young pup, you've got alot of skill and PASSION in you, I can tell.

Thanks for the great read.

Chris.

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

5 posted 2000-02-20 11:58 AM

Hi there sweetie,

True love sustains no matter what,it aslo keeps ones heart a float no matter the distance.
I liked this poem alot look forward to more of your work.

Cerenity-1

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

6 posted 2000-02-20 12:43 PM

Nikkisweet, I like alot, this work from your heart.

Parker

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