Open Poetry #6 |
Passion |
spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
To simply say I love you In no way can it describe. The passion and desire How much you make me thrive. You bring a certain fire A gentle burning glow A fire like no other I could ever know. It’s with me every morning And with me when I sleep I need to be inside you Your warmth that is so deep. To hold your naked body Your breast pressed close to mine. The softness of your skin Our bodies intertwined. I wake up in the morning And feel that you are there Wrap my arms around you You know how much I care. I’ve written many phrases And all of which no doubt Contain the many pleasures Your all that I’m about. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
OH MY !!! You just completely and totally described the exact way I feel about my wife. I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!!!!! Very well done, wery well indeed. "Your all that I’m about." That has to be one of the most powerful phrases I've read in poetry in a long, long time. It completly describes TRUE LOVE. VERY VERY WELL DONE!! Chris p.s. sorry if I seem over enthusiastic...I just love a great poem. Chris |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
spiked... I remember the feeling well, all to well. Very nice poem. B Gravitt |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
GREAT POEM *WISHES FOR THAT* |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
The passion in this piece is grand, to be sure, but what touches me is the degree of accompanying devotion that you express so well...this is beautiful, in word and sentiment, spiked. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thanks Chris, betty and just another. was afraid to post it thought it might cross the line for open poetry but this is where i like to post so I took a chance. hopefully my judgement was right. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Mmmmm...what else could I say? You just keep getting better, and better, and better... |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you meadowmuse. Was one written from the heart to the one I love. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thanks serenity Hoped you might like it. |
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