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~ A prayer of Unity~
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~ A prayer of Unity~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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By will of Fate, I give thee my honor- And in return, I ask thee for love. A love so pure, My own heart shall melt- ~A unity~ Devine, That I may share in perfection. Such perfection, I claim not to be- Yet my soul remains slave, As it has chosen thee... ~To dwell in my eternity~ Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
devina, I loved this ~To dwell in my eternity~ very sweetly sincere. Parker |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
I love it Devina.... "By will of Fate, I give thee my honor- And in return, I ask thee for love." If I had read this a few months ago.... I would have tried to include that line in my wedding vows. Very very meaningful. Chris |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Devina! Simply beautiful! Denise |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
~Yet my soul remains slave, As it has chosen thee...~ Beautiful... Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Wow!!!  very nice piece here great job devina... If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
James- your sweetness must have rubbed off on me, eh???  Thank you much dear!!Chris- I'm honored to know that you would have considered this in your wedding vows!!! I'm hoping one day to say them at mine!!!! Denise, Breathe, and tori- my heart thanks you all for the "beautiful"!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
"By will of Fate, I give thee my honor" Dang that sure says a lot girl. Powerful words right from the gate on this one. You deserve love in return, too. May it reach you soon. Michael |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
You have such a way with word`s that every time I read one of your writing`s my lil ole heart goes pitter patter  Thank`s once again for sharing your feeling`s Devina. How true your signature is Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Micheal- I was feeling a bit heavy when I wrote this...glad you can relate! I hope all is well with you!!! Wizzard- I'm glad to know I get someone's heart going pitter-patter!! Thanks to you m'friend!!Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, devina... I like it very much!! |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Lady, what can I say! You take sweet words and mold them like clay and inside our hearts they truly stay. Where oh where do you get such inspiration! Another triumph! Danny |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Thank you suthern...a compliment from you is always sweet!!! Danny- I can't honestly say where the inspiration comes from...dreams maybe??? Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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