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Open Poetry #6

My Angel From Above

trevorskogsbergh
Member

since 2000-02-03

Posts 129
South Pasadena, CA

0 posted 2000-02-11 12:14 PM

To dream a lovers dream
To hold a lovers hand
To kiss a lovers lips
United we both stand

Beyond the naked eye
Dreams all so true
The eternal flame of hope
I didn't have a clue

Whispers of the soul
A sonnet to a rose
Summers final bliss
From where the flower grows

Unspoken Emmotions
Of luminous things
Treasured innosence
To my heart she brings

Silent Whispers
A gentle heart
Passions Shadow
Came from the start

You are my dreams
My unfilled love
Come back to me please
My angel from above

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

1 posted 2000-02-11 12:38 PM

A sonnet to a rose...
yep... me likes.

trevorskogsbergh
Member

since 2000-02-03

Posts 129
South Pasadena, CA

2 posted 2000-02-17 07:14 PM

Thanks for the reply Mike!

Marina
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

3 posted 2000-02-17 07:38 PM

I really liked the flow and how easily the mesage comes across. very nice poem.

Marina

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

4 posted 2000-02-17 07:43 PM

This is soooo romantic!!! such beautiful sentiments!!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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5 posted 2004-05-21 03:22 AM

very romantic!

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