Open Poetry #6 |
Hand of Fate |
Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Hand of Fate Hands that ache, Heads that bow Thoughts that hurt, Hearts that break Shoulders barring a broken vow Hands of guilt, Heads of shame Thoughts of honour, Hearts of grace Shoulders carrying unjust blame Hand in hand, Heads in sync Thoughts in rhythm, Heart’s in love Shoulders carrying a fused link Marina Feb 14/2000 |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marina, Yes I like this format, its very thought provoking. Parker |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James: Thankyou. I'm curious as to what thoughts came to mind when you read this? Marina |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marina, Interesting poem, well done. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Seymour: thanks, It's not a very long poem but I hope people can see a message in it. Marina |
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