Open Poetry #6 |
Glance |
Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Glance Glance at my glass my smiling reflection kisses your eyes. Glance at my plate blind of reflectiveness it's duty just to hold. Glance at my spoon as it's warmth radiates from coffee in it's cup. Glance at my fork the tines penetrating the object of desire. Glance at my knife and watch as it cuts delicately a pattern. Glance at my napkin as it falls gracefully to the floor as I rise. Glance at my feet a journey abounds if you care to follow. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i do wish to follow where yuh goin ill listen to yuh spout verse as this |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nurse....this is truly a clever verse....from one nurse to another.....well done |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So many moments and things pass us by unless we look closely at how important they are. What a journey! Really liked this poem! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nurse, A very unique invitation, enjoyed the read. Well done. |
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Lady in Red Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 147 |
My dear Crachet, sitting here all by herself Glancing around, feeling sorry for yourself ? Let us have some fun and maybe a dance I will follow your feet with my dazzling elegance I hear there's a band playing right next door Let's get those adorable feet off the floor Maybe a tango, or perhaps a Cha Cha Cha a little twist, or a tropical Salsa ? |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Lady, your a little late the parties already started I've been dancing for hours, why don't you come on over and grab a partner and dosido.LOL |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Walt,know these feet could lead you astray. Ruth: Thank You much. Martie: Thank You, glad you enjoyed. Seymour: Thank You |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so graceful and flowing, Nursie!! You are showing your true colors at last I see!! Perhaps you're not such a meanie after all!! Denise |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
I very fine piece of writing! That's what I'm talking about! Excellent! Keep 'em coming! You writing is getting better and better! |
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