Open Poetry #6 |
Personal Ad....Reply below |
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I’m a caring woman With an angel’s face But my lonely heart Has an empty space I’ve nearly given up Said, “What’s the use?” For where can a poet Find herself a muse? I’m looking for friendship, Trust, and romance Someone who cares, That will take a chance I enjoy quiet walks, Sunsets, forests, and streams I’m searching for someone To share all my dreams I like slow dancing, Hugs, candles and wine But I don’t like games So don’t feed me a line A brain is a must And personality too! Honesty and compassion Does this sound like you? If you think that maybe You’re the one for me Just drop me a line And we both shall see Have you ever noticed That the words... "Goodbye" "I'm sorry" "I love you" Are so easy to pronounce ...Yet so hard to say ~Javan |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
lol love this ruth....love this...yep, poets have their own heartaches...great poem |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Hoot, this is a nice poem. I suspect your mailbox will be filled with those willing to take a chance. (what kind of wine?) Except, you forgot the address...... I really like your poetic imagination! Danny |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
This is great! but I have a question...it seems that most of us are looking for the same qualities and if that is fact...then why are there so many lonely people out there? anyways..wonderful poem..hoot.. Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
dear rn hoot owl i do not smell foul so if you will give me the time you can be the first and i'll be the ending rhyme o yuh o yuh baby baby o yuh o yuh baby baby where yuh been all my life o no no put away that knife!! yipe! |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Where have all the good men gone? Long time passing. Where have all the good men gone? Gone, gone away. *sigh*. Hey Ruth...send some of the repliers my way would ya?..lol. Walt...she warned you about feeding her a line! This tiger has sharp teeth ya know. lol. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, I'm sure you will get some answer from this wonderful Poem add. I know I would if I could But what ever I will always be your friend. *L* Sy |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Seymore...how very sweet of you. Your friendship is a gift I cherish, thank you Corazon...thank you Danny...white wine only, my e-mail is easy to access and thanks for your kind remarks Breathe...I;m afraid I can't answer that one thanks for the reply Walt..."o yuh o yuh baby baby" that sounds like a line if ever I saw one....thanks for the smile Marilyn...sure as long as I get first pick |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Great poem, Hoot!!! Would you write an ad for me? LOL. Now mind you... if mine's complimentary, it'll have to be fiction! LOL. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem, Ruth! Denise |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Hoot: Me thinks you ask too much but there might be the odd alien about..*g* Great advert, can I help you test them?...For medicinal purposes only you understand... HUSG Ouvrir mon coeur et âme |
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Mr. Cucumber Junior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 18 |
Dear Ms Hoot, I'm answering The ad you desperately writ. I think there is a chance for you If you'll lower your sights a bit. I know you have been searching, For yourself a muse. I don't know much about that, I haven't got a single clue. I see you need some friendship, Would like trust and romance I'll give you lots of some of that When I get inside your pants. I'll give you lots of quiet walks, You'll see sunsets, forests, and streams. But if there's football on TV, You haven't got a dream. I'm really good at dancing slow, Except when it comes to truth. Then I dance all around it girl, Like I have since my youth. Hugs, candles and lots of wine Are the things that I adore. I don't like games, either, Baby (Have I told her that before???) I have a brain, you can trust me Its as good as when brand new. I keep it like that all the time, Because its hardly ever used. Personality is my middle name, Honesty and compassion are, too. I am a saint with shiny halo (I think a one night stand will do) I'm thinking that just maybe, You should give me a good lay, Then you can tell me how great I am, Before I slip away. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Hoot, I think Mr. Cucumber is giving you a hint of what to avoid. Be wary of all vegetables with slick lines. Now where’s your knife. |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Well,Im not much of a dancer and I could never be as Romantic as Mr.Potato Head up there ...ooops..I mean Mr.Cucumber, but I do have a gentle,warm heart full of love to offer.Hope that`ll do? For our Sweet Hoot_Owl of Passion < !signature--> Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. [This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-16-2000).] |
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infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
maybe one day ill be as different as the next person . stay beautiful hoot |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
When I was a teenager, I had a beach towel with a "want ad" on it, and did it ever get me in trouble...had to leave the beach a few times when the drunken sailors got a look at it..LOL...I think you wrote a better ad than my towel btw, I'd ignore Mr. Cucumbers reply...you know how green and slimy they are when they get "peeled". |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
What I really love about your poems, Hoot, are the responses you draw from people! Something about your style that makes people come alive! Corinne |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Some gals may ask to borrow your poem, I'd ask to borrow your picture!! Cute poem. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
suthern...I'm sure I'd have no problem at all writing one for you and totally based on fact Denise...thank you Rainbow Girl....Medicinal purposes only, I understand...perhaps my being a nurse will come in handy there ....thanks Mr. Cucumber...you certainly are a slick one boy...your poem sounds like an ad for exactly what I DON'T want in a man....thanks for the smile and the cleverness of your reply Haleyja...he doesn't stand a chance thank you infinat3 sadn3ss...as I said before, different is not a bad thing....thanks for the compliment Lorelei54...LOL, thanks Hon...I'll be sure to keep your advice in mind Corinne...I can't think of a higher compliment you could have paid my work...thank you a sandgrain...thank you Wizzard...what more could a girl ask for? Dancings not a problem, I prefer slow dancing in private anyway...and I'm glad you lack Mr. Cucumbers sense of romance Thank you for the beautiful rose. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I think it is appropriate now to reply For the first time We know each other's rhyme and poetry We know each other's way to destiny We know a lot about each other's pain We stand together enduring the rain We hold on to our hearts You in words and I in art Today I heard a chime For the first time I listened to your voice Know that I will always be here I am yours Truly The chevalier The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
This is great, hoot! Perhaps a new challenge for each of us- we can turn Ron's forum into a "want ad" place (teasing, ya know) Interesting to see your replies. I wonder how everyone would write up their obituaries, umm, I mean, "personal ads" cute, cute idea! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Ruth, I hope who ever comes knockin this time is deserving of you! Someone who is honest and will treat you like you should be treated. You deserve the best my friend! <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
This is beautiful. We women share all the same dreams. B Gravitt |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
A very tender request from a very classy lady. I too am pulling for you, I wish I would've looked for those qualities too before I married. Don't ever lower your standards for anyone, anything less would surely sacrifice the quality that is you. Best wishes in your search. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
HMMMMMMMM..... (Scratches head...) (Looks at wife....Looks at you....) (Scratches head...) Can I have a bit to decide what to do about her? Just kidding Ruth. If not for the love in my life already, I would definitely be filling you mailbox with requests. Love the poem. Chris. p.s. taking off on January's challenge for an obit. I'm thinking it a little diffucult to imagine one's self dead and what could be said about your life. Interesting idea I think...maybe we should all try it. Thanks again for the great read. Chris. Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
well written hoot (as always) whenever I see your name I know I need paper in the printer. Thanks Rich |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Helmut...always a knight in shining armor to my rescue...thank you Rich...I'm so glad you enjoy my work so Chris...I think she's a lucky gal....thank you By the way, I think I'll sit the obit thing out Gemini, Betty, Whtdove, and January Flowers...thank you all for your kind words |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
O.K. Hoot Owl I'm going to post one for you and you'll find it simple but true. James |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I'm a long standing member of the Audobon society....I love animals, particularly owls. I only eat "fowl" for the 'vitamins' that they produce....particularly "calcium"....at least enough to make one hard bone...just call me.....555-toerag |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Well now - you have a mailbox full of responses to your ad - and I have one full of pictures - let's start mixing and matching - The pleasure is all ours... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
What man wouldn't answer an ad from such a beautiful poet? Looks like they're lining up. Hoot, you should have thought of this before. Now all the women poets are going to follow your lead. Anyway, lovely poem Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
James...some good questions you ask in your poem Toerag...LOL, did you not see the part about no lines? Nan...hey, looking forward to seeing some of those pictures Elizabeth...thanks |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Ruth, I'd go with Mr. Cucumber...I happen to know firsthand....er....uh.....just pick him, that's all I'm gonna say, I'll leave it at that! hehe Good one there Mr. Cuke. Talk about subtle... LOL Hey Ruth, did you run your man off too? Sorry.....I shouldn't crack jokes when I don't know the real deal....email me if you want, ok? I still say go with the pickle...he's pretty hard up right now for some attention! hehe |
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Chris Goodman Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 92Issaquah, Washington usa |
I think that is the ultimate search in life. Just finding that special someone that makes us whole. We always say that we are fine on our own, but our bodies were not made to go solo. Good luck to ya. Chris Blue Moon |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Ruth wonderful poem, how did you go with your replies tracie |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Dear Ruth, good luck with you ad, hope you find a sensitive, funny,slow dancing, cuddly poet who is perfect for you. Cos YOU DESERVE IT!!! I'm lucky to have my muse in Sven, though we will probably never meet, we are always there for each other, and that is enough. (HUGS) my friend and thanks May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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wildbill58 Junior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 19 |
Hoot,I know that your profile is true.ps(thanks for the wine) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thanks everyone WildBill...you got me rolling on the floor laughing with that comment. Glad you liked it And where in the world are you digging up all these poems from...lol |
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