Open Poetry #6 |
If Love would come again |
Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
If Love would come again, end this drought, this heart without bring joy to being, and loneliness fleeing take gloom from this room, put harmony in tune a smile on solin face, sadness to replace kindred soul to rely, as day and time fly forgetting hurt before, new touch to restore this heart to mend, solitude to end tender lover's kiss, nights of total bliss new passions inspired, endless touching desired broken fantasy to recover, new hand to discover wishful dream coming true, til earthly life is thru no thoughts to conceal, a destiny to reveal What dreams may begin, If Love would come again < !signature--> [This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 02-15-2000).] |
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freckles Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 160Virginia USA |
Danny, how absolutely beautiful. Beautiful words, wonderfully written. I'll be looking forward to more. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow, Danny, this is just beautiful - a real poem to soar. Well done! 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Danny .. this is just exquisite. I feel the sound of love, waiting for a heart to happen. You made me 'feel'. When love does come, and it will again, embrace it tenderly from within. For in your arms tucked safely away, a love to last you all your days. Thank you for sharing your thoughts so lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
"What dreams may begin, If Love would come again" We must never give up hope my friend, neither on love or on our dreams |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful poem Danny! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice |
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