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Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
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0 posted 2000-02-15 06:45 PM



               If Love would come again,
        end this drought, this heart without
      bring joy to being, and loneliness fleeing
    take gloom from this room, put harmony in tune
     a smile on solin face, sadness to replace
      kindred soul to rely, as day and time fly
     forgetting hurt before, new touch to restore
          this heart to mend,  solitude to end
       tender lover's kiss, nights of total bliss
   new passions inspired, endless touching desired
   broken fantasy to recover, new hand to discover
wishful dream coming true, til earthly life is thru
     no thoughts to conceal, a destiny to reveal

         What dreams may begin,
                  If Love would come again  



        

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freckles
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1 posted 2000-02-15 07:06 PM


Danny, how absolutely beautiful.  Beautiful words, wonderfully written.  I'll be looking forward to more.
Severn
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2 posted 2000-02-15 07:26 PM


Wow, Danny, this is just beautiful - a real poem to soar. Well done!



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life enriches writing'
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3 posted 2000-02-15 07:42 PM


Oh, Danny .. this is just exquisite.
I feel the sound of love,
waiting for a heart to happen.

You made me 'feel'.

When love does come,
and it will again,
embrace it tenderly
from within.
For in your arms
tucked safely away,
a love to last you
all your days.


Thank you for sharing your thoughts so lovely.
~*Marge*~


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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 2000-02-15 07:51 PM


"What dreams may begin,
If Love would come again"

We must never give up hope my friend, neither on love or on our dreams    

        

Martie
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5 posted 2000-02-15 07:52 PM


Wonderful poem Danny!
passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-05-21 03:42 AM


very nice
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