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We Are One |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
I will always remember When our hearts came together Of the time we spent in that place We can truly say forever I lie here thinking of you And remember your gentle kiss People think we're crazy But it can't get better than this We were two But now we are one Not wanting what we did To ever be undone Never to die Those cold and lonely coals We came together Setting afire and combining our souls stay cool all  ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"Never to die Those cold and lonely coals We came together Setting afire and combining our souls" Especially loved this part! great poem, Lavada! Claire |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Beautiful poem Lavada, you make me jealous with your imagery, and your passion. Thanks Chris |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I like your style very much.Espically the last verse of the poem.keep it up.  |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Thanks all...Kinda makes me feel better, knowing I have a family here... I'm going to start crying *sniff* Thanks againcool ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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