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Nikkisweet
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 183
Tx, Dallas

0 posted 2000-02-15 12:51 PM


Oh,no I think i've been hit
I think it's cupid's arrow
Now I'm going to have a fit
Being in love is great
Its just ending it I hate
I love the feeling that I get
When you're about to kiss me
That day our lips first met
The warmth I felt when you first hugged me
That feeling I'll never forget
I'm in love and you're the only person
I want to see
Its been two months and
I hope you won't dump me.

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CMGrimm
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 685
USA
1 posted 2000-02-15 01:48 AM


Hey Nikki...I hope he don't dump you either....but if he does, gimmee a ring, my younger brother needs a date, his girl dumped him today.  (haha) Just kiddn'
very good work.  Be looking forward to reading more.

Thanks

Chris

devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
2 posted 2000-02-15 02:55 AM


Very simple and to the point!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2000-02-15 03:00 AM


A sweet little poem.....I hope you don't get dumped either...Tracie    
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