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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Black Diamonds. < !signature-->If only my tears could fall upon your lap but they fall onto this page forming pear shape Diamonds, Black Diamonds. No shine, no luster just dull wet pear shaped Black Diamonds upon this page. No sparkle or colours of the rainbow. No clarity, just a gloomy glow Fading, Fading. Fading. Disappearing From this page, you are slowly evaporating Going Going Gone! Dark Angel. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 02-14-2000).] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I'm starting to know the feeling |
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Twilight_Angel Junior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 22USA |
I know how you feel! Very emotional. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dark Angel~ I like the way you made this flow. Black Diamonds? How descriptive of our tears. Really pretty images. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful but sad image...I would never have thought of this...good job!  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Rex, Twilight, Marge and PdV, thanks so much for your kind and lovely replies  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
No matter how many times I read this Maree, I love the descriptions Jenny |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
DA: Beautiful yet so sad..  HUSG Ouvrir mon coeur et âme |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Remarkable work Angel! This was sad, but I love how you described it! Black diamonds!  <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Great imagery DA....this is so sad  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
What can I say? This is lovely - but so sad!! I'm off to find a smile for you...hang on, lugging it over (it's pretty big)...  got it? 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Sad, yet described so well, beautiful poem. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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