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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Sense & Sensibility I call to you tonight In desperate need of The warmth in your Heart. Touch me and let me Feel your soft caress as You wrap your wings Around me Sing to me with your Heavenly melodic voice Whisper to me sweet Nothings Delicately kiss my Fervent lips, urgently Waiting your burning Passion. Listen as our hearts Beat as one rhythm Flowing, regulating, Harmoniously. Look into the windows Of my soul, seek and you Shall find, the depths Of my love. Dark Angel. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
I love this poem. I know the feeling. Now the trick is to find someone else with the same need. Thanx for sharing. SD If dying is the process of living life to its end. Then what is living? |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow! Such intense feeling! I like this a lot DA!  |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Beautiful Maree...I always enjoy very much reading your heart-felt words  Jennifer |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
SD,Thanks so much, so glad you liked it, I hope you find that someone real soon.  ---------------- PdV, thanks so much hon, glad you do ---------------- JennyLee, thank you, as I do always, enjoy reading your amazing and excellent work very much. thank you again!What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is so soft and romantic...I love it!!!! Not too mushy...just enough Definantly one of my favorites DA!!!Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dark Angel- This is simply lovely. 'Touch me and let me Feel your soft caress as You wrap your wings Around me' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ms Devina, thank you for your lovely reply, makes me feel good to know it is one of your favourites Glad you liked it! ------------------- Marge, thanks Hon for your lovely reply. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow DA....this is absolutely beautiful. I'd have to agree with PDV....this is amoung my favorites of yours no hands down. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ruth hon, thanks so very much for your lovely comment and compliment, so glad you liked it!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Knocking passionate socks off eh? Excellent my friend! HUGS <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
Well written. This piece displays a great deal of passion. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Angel - this is gorgeous. Let's hope so hey? Hugs. K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweet! |
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