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A Valentine
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A Valentine |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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A Valentine I've breathed the essence of the man you are The sweetest and most loving scent by far A fragrance so enriching and sublime My every breath is in this Valentine My tongue in thirst has tasted of its goal And sipped from out the wellspring of your soul Savoring a purity so fine Now from my well I send this Valentine My lips have garnered kisses for your claim That every moment whisper out your name Bewitched am I by wonder of its chime I send a kiss within this Valentine My mind engraved a vision of your face The inner eye has held it in embrace A portrait of a countenance divine My joy is mirrored in this Valentine So here's a kiss, a whisper, an embrace My breath, my soul, my vision of your face This is the message of a Valentine It means that I am yours and you are mine So let me celebrate our love this way I wish for you a Happy Valentines Day Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 02-14-2000).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ellizabeth, how very beautiful this is. straight from the heart. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
All I can see is the love you feel I'm sure he knows your love is real Such beautiful piece you have created Liz Very very sweet A Happy Valentine comes your way from me The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lovely, Liz. Beauty in the face of love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Gee, Elizabeth, and I didn't get you anything!!! Well, I accept this beautiful poem, anyway. Thank you!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, This valentine is a work of art. And it has surely melted my heart. So I will save the liquid to make a toast. If ever we meet and I be the host. Love Sy |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Elizabeth! Your love for each other shines through in this!! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This one speaks clearly of your heart Liz...I do hope you gave it to him, what a wonderful gift  |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This poem is so full of love.....what a wonderful gift to him...did ya give it? Another work of art!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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