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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA 
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The Cycle Soft sunset gentle breeze I say to you "Love Me Please" Whispering silence quiet pain I'll wait for you Come back again Stinging words Painful things Take me away Please, give me wings Emotions, Love's most wonderful way To let you know I love you, today. C.M. Grimm |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Hello everyone...I truly hope you enjoy my poetry. This is my first post so I am really nervous about everyones perception of me and my writing. I've been writing for about 10 years now but this is the first time I've ever opted to publicly display my work. Please feel free to post your ideas and suggestions. Or contact me by e-mail to maybe offer helpful hints and ideas to improve my works. Thank you. CMG |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
This is a very sweet first entry, and you're starting out fine. Let me be the first to welcome you, and assure you that you have nothing to worry about |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Thanks Ted for your enthusiasm and uplifting words...Im reading through lots of other poets work right now and trying to learn as much as I can about everyone here. I hope to become an active part of this forum community and hope to be able to participate in as much as possible. Thank You. cmg |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I agree...a very sweet and thoughtful poem. I extend my hand in welcome, CMG, and am looking forward to reading more of your work. Take care, Claire |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Thank you Meadowmuse. It is very nice to be so openly welcome to express my feelings and my work. I hope to be able to spend ample time on here to get to konw everyone. Thank You Chris |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
CMG- WELCOME ABOARD! This place is like no other and you'll lack in sleep for a few weeks (at least) And as for getting to know everyone through their writings: HAHAHA! So many character traits which are ever changing with the seconds. Keeps it interesting. Great entrance with this writing and again WELCOME!  JF |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Thank You JF for your welcome. Again, I thank everyone for welcoming me and my poetry. I don't have much experience with poetry posts or with HTML but I am studying hard at them both...at least as hard as I can anyway.(HAHA). I hope to hear more form each of you as time passes. Thank You. Chris |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Hi Chris, welcome to Passions. I'm sure you will enjoy your stay with us. I enjoyed this read very much, it was sad and very well expressed. I especially liked the first stanza. Look forward to reading more of your work. So don't be shy!  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! This is a lovely first poem! I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special welcome!  |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Such a good and heartfelt poem Well done, and welcome to passions Also your web site is very good I'm sure to read more you inked The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
A nice heartfelt poem I can relate to...welcome to passions |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Thank you everyone for the special welcome to Passions. I appreciate the heartfelt response I'm getting here from my writing. I hope to be able to communicate with each and every one of you in the near future, to share poetry and ideas. Again, thanks everyone. Chris |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
welcome to passions chris this is very good so honest. Well done. Rich |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Thanks again spiked for the kind comments. Chris |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is simple and very heartfelt...WELCOME with open arms m'friend!!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
And Chris, you don't have to respond to thank everyone for every comment. If you do that, you'll have little time to write new poems, and we all understand that. So read our poems, comment as you feel like it, and post some more for us . . . and you don't have to answer this. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Chris don't be shy this was a great first entry, WELCOME TO PASSIONS as you've already guessed everyone is very welcoming and encouraging... This place is a great place to be once again welcome from Tracie P.S hope to read more of your work. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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