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Lovers vaudeville
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Lovers vaudeville |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Lovers vaudeville The curtain opens on a time. The hour glass bows in prime And spotted in a flood of light, Forever, in a heart as bright. A setting of a special kind, The backdrop of a highlight mind. Forever will this portrait be, The sole editor and trustee. It is the way of lovers star, It is the way that lovers are. It is the unction of lovers think. For love is the pen and the ink. A moment of pure confection, A moment of pure perfection. The high point of a spirits climb. Anointment and arrest of time. The face of beauties overkill. Frozen in this vaudeville. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
You've created quite the show here Seymore  Enjoyed it a lot |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, Nice comment thank you *L* Sy |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, This is absolutely brilliant Liz |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
May the curtains never close on your many gifts. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I would not know how to top the replies And then again why should I Your poem has left me singing Very impressed here The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful and impressive indeed! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thank you so much. *L* Helmut, Thank you for the impressed. Dark Angel, Beautiful compliments, thank you. *L* Sy |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
....and you put on quite a show yourself, Sy. Well done. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Excellent Sy. Enjoyed the read. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ ENCORE ! ENCORE !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, Well you know what they say, the show must go on. Eloise, Thank you for the excellent. Marge, You are absolutely lovable. *L* Sy |
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