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sKiTtLeS
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0 posted 2000-04-17 07:51 PM



The deep dark shadows of your mind, teasing me.
Taunting me.
Confusing my emotions.
Wondering what you're thinking, whether or not you believe the words coming out of your mouth.
Wanting to trust you.
Wanting you to heal my broken heart.
But further my heart crumbles.
Further it tears.
Bleeding with the innocence of my existence.
Torn apart by tainted trust...


 "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."
-the words of a friend

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1 posted 2000-04-17 10:00 PM


Skittles,
I can relate to this pain.
But I must honestly say that I have been on both sides of this situation. Neither side feels any better in the end. Thanks for posting this piece of my heart.

Jeffrey

sKiTtLeS
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2 posted 2000-04-17 10:17 PM


I think you're right, either way it hurts.
You're very welcome. I'm glad you understood.

sKiTtLeS~

 "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."
-the words of a friend

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