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Open Poetry #6

Rendezvous

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

0 posted 2000-04-16 09:35 PM

I watched her
flowing long lines
and cascading hair
slightly blowing
in the gentle breeze
as she approached me
from across the parking lot.

I felt her warmth
as we embraced
and a stirring in
my soul
as she whispered
"I've missed you"
in my ear.

I took her
by the hand
and led her
up the flight of stairs
into my room.
I turned on the lamp
next to the bed.

I caught a glimpse of her
in the mirror over my bureau.

I realized
that in a few moments
I would be making love
to a woman
that I could never really
make love to.

Christopher M. Grimm

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

1 posted 2000-04-16 09:23 PM

So sad -- and such a pretty soul warming
poem - thanks for sharing --
Other than that, I am speechless --)

netswan

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

2 posted 2000-04-17 10:54 PM

Thanks Netswan...apparently so was everyone else...lol

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2000-04-18 06:24 AM

this was beautiful!

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

4 posted 2000-04-18 08:53 PM

thanks netswan...glad you could enjoy...

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

5 posted 2000-04-21 04:16 PM

Beautiful work here, CM .. I like the twist you took in the last stanza ..

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